Big oof... worst chapter so far, riddled with either mistakes or plot holes. From the MC getting his eye back for a bit and losing it again, to the nobles somehow being more upset he brought an elf rather than the literal slave on his other arm. Especially when you consider he's not there alone, he's with his dad who also brought an elf. You'd think they would be more aghast about the head of the household doing that and influencing his kid.
And then there's the balcony scene: both of her hands are visible for most of the conversation, where did the knife come from? Then they lunge at each other and he doesn't die immediately; then he grabs her neck with BOTH arms and he doesn't die immediately and the cherry on top he magically disarms her with his RIGHT arm when the knife is in HER RIGHT arm - so he went from her neck either over or under his LEFT arm and somehow got the knife without her noticing or struggling... ffs that's just so bad.
And then there's the balcony scene: both of her hands are visible for most of the conversation, where did the knife come from? Then they lunge at each other and he doesn't die immediately; then he grabs her neck with BOTH arms and he doesn't die immediately and the cherry on top he magically disarms her with his RIGHT arm when the knife is in HER RIGHT arm - so he went from her neck either over or under his LEFT arm and somehow got the knife without her noticing or struggling... ffs that's just so bad.
