Kyuuketsu Hime wa Barairo no Yume wo Miru - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - Eh? Did I Just Seduce you?

[MangaDex]

 

[Mangamoz]

So is this dude the one she will put on that skimpy outfit on the cover for?

 

[jasty]

Already have a nice ass shot!

But is she actually wearing sexy pantsu or is it just his imagination?

 

[Nesiax]

what ? ? ? ?
what am I reading ?

 

[NinjaGoemon]

Protag gonna lose their damn mind before they even get somewhere. Already foaming at the mouth.

 

[jhs_reika]

Wait. Is she gonna like men, or will she get females?
I see that there's a Romance tag but no Girls' Love tag.

 

[eriere]

translators the ai redrawing is fucking up the raw quality reee

 

[Terrate]

2 chapters in, mc already imagined himself getting ravaged TWICE.

So, does anyone know if the MC will turn HeteroGae or will this be YuriStraight

 

[Lacie]

if i remember right its more hetero. but its some time since i last actively followed the complete Novel.
Btw it plays in the same world as Ragweed Princess (same universe, this one was released first in novel form)

 

[monkey123]

Good good, let the genderbend flow through you! Now succ succ succ!

 

[sailorarashi]

So, does anyone know if the MC will turn HeteroGae or will this be YuriStraight

Going by the novels, neither. She does seem to have a little crush on Joey from time to time, but there's no romance in the story. The manga is definitely adding stuff, though, because she never does the "Oh right, I'm a girl now!" thing, or at least not nearly so much. She more or less doesn't care and just immediately behaves perfectly feminine.

 

[Aricitic]

Since corrections were asked for on the last page I will make a suggestion: use free software to grammar check the text. Proofreading is fine but there were enough simple grammatical errors (word or word tense usage mostly) to suggest having a second proofreader.

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Try using Grammarly. The free version has add-ons for various web browsers which will check everything from spelling and simple grammar to word usage and word tense (past, present and future tense) based on the rest of the sentence.

Also it doesn't log or report anything (relevant) so it isn't like it would do anything against the translation effort.

I have personally used it in personal (and as close to professional as I have gotten) writing, and thought enough of it to actually subscribe back when I was doing (a LOT) more writing than I currently do (and when I could afford it).



You certainly don't have to use AI (which is what Grammarly is), but since it's free (for what I am suggesting it for) it couldn't hurt. Unless or until you have another human proofreader I would suggest it (or MS Word, but Word isn't as powerful and won't catch as many of the same mistakes, and isn't free).

Finally, I absolutely must say that the chapter was completely readable, no issue there (I have certainly read enough MTL that I had to retranslate in my head to understand, and this was not that).
So, an example: page 2, third panel, only text bubble: "Have you, by any chance, knew what Lapock-san and Tamegoro san did during that time?" Correct "Have" to "Do" and "knew" to "know", and add a "-" between "Tamegoro" and "san". Effectively the (most likely) correct phrasing is: "Do you, by any chance, know what Lapock-san and Tamegoro-san did during that time?"

 

[goofyMAX]

translators the ai redrawing is fucking up the raw quality reee

can't help it for now ¯\(ツ)/¯ is the cons of using upscaler
beginning from page 11, the AI redraw tool somehow outputs less resolution than the raw I currently have, so i gotta upscale. could pretty much resort to doing white boxes like i did in early ch 1, but its kinda meh

unless you're fine with 600x600 lol

going forward, i'd probably have to isolate each panel that needs redraw and stitch it with the original raw so the upscaler doesnt fuck up the whole page. at least, until toona's dev fix the redraw problem

 

[Lazy_Kitsuna]

It's a man inside. Its a man inside.. A man inside...

 

[zdanputra]

it's kinda suck when genbend already have romance at early chapter

 

[xironi]

Lusting after young boys, well, bloodlusting that is. I completely forgot That this and ragweed princess were related

 

[Nokinirus]

what ? ? ? ?
what am I reading ?

The novel before Ragweed Princess. Recommend ya read through the novel... Just saying...

 

[monkey123]

The novel before Ragweed Princess. Recommend ya read through the novel... Just saying...

Novel doesn't have lewd illustrations, does it?

 

[Nokinirus]

Novel doesn't have lewd illustrations, does it?

Nah, but it does have it's comedic bits.

Story is honestly not too bad and not amazing. I'm interested in how it gets adapted... Especially with how much the MC describes themselves in dresses.

 

[nueee]

Thank you!