Starts off well enough, but has soured for several reasons:
First, disjointed and underdeveloped ideas and understanding of concepts which are integral to the story.
Second, later chapters contain many cut-away scenes that lack meaningful dialogue or nuance. They are too high up the pyramid of abstraction and do not develop characters!
And lastly, new characters are always introduced and are painted in either totally black or white perspectives. This is not a problem in itself, except that it is an absolute--which makes the story seem fake/repetitive.
On the whole, the story is okay, but with this micro-genre being as saturated as it is, I see no need to continue.