Author clearly doesn't know how to write tragedies well. Most likely his talents lie in comedy and light hearted stories.
Meaning fun and light hearted parts are written well, like when MC has to hide his strength or decide who to fight.
But out of 8-9/10 it becomes 5 at best is because this story has tragedy genre in it.
It's bad because of two things.
First: Every single hero/villain (outside of MC group) are evil without any chance or redemption, they try their best to ruin MC's life and any innocent person in their way (no idea how to insert a spoiler but this is your warning) for example inquisition guy or even spearman and other hunters. All are evil who are brainwashed to kill innocent people with smiles on their faces.
And reason I say that author doesn't write tragedies well is because every single time MC's group interacts with them, they become idiots. Which results in MC's group suffering, when they shouldn't.
Second: Author doesn't know how to commit. Inquisition guy is evil without any chance of redemption, yet author artificially pushes it to make him appear as a good guy. Noble who overseers a prison is evil guy that should be buried underneath a prison, yet author shows makes him look like an idiot once and all is forgotten. If you want a darker theme, just commit, because right now this story is only for masochists who enjoy frustration and seeing how MC suffers when he shouldn't (logically)