If we're going into the PR a little more in depth, there's also:
Page 1- 3rd box, "His power has significantly" and either use "gone up" or "grown" by itself. ("Grown up" is possible, but is more geared toward talking about the development/maturity of power, not the raw power itself [which our awesome king has obtained in spades].)
Page 4- 3rd box, First two boxes- Remove the "but still," is the easiest way to tidy that up (with Terrate's fix too). Or you could keep the 'but still' and remove "Although". Having both makes the whole thing awkward.
Page 4- 3rd box, Last box- It works, but would sound more fluid with just "For victory!"
Page 5- 1st box- "The victims of the war" should be "casualties of war".
Page 5-1st box- Replace "deadly" with "fatally".
Page 7-1st box- "heroes' steps " (Needs apostrophe.)
Page 7- 3rd box- "The heroes were leaving behind" // "mountains of corpses on the bridge, risking their own lives."
Page 8- 1st box- Remove "the".
Page 8- 2nd box- This is right, but if you really want to make it sound natural, remove "was", so it reads "The eyes of every soldier and beggar were filled with terrible anger, their blood boiling."
Page 8- Last 2 boxes- Right, but should be separate sentences or should be separated by an ellipsis (...) .
Page 9- 1st Box- Need to separate the sentence at "I brought 22 men from the castle."
Page 11- Remove the second instance of "warriors", it's redundant.
While not necessary, those are the small details that brings it from readable to good. It's actually a cut above the rest of the fledgling groups (including ones that have native English PR's) and definitely impressive for non-native English speakers.
Also, very nice job with the formation on of the text. It bothers me how often that gets forgotten. I would recommend using a font that uses all caps, but that's just me. It would probably make things easier on the punctuation side anyway. We used Wild Words, but I'm not sure if that's still the standard.
The only (non-constructive) criticism I have is that it's kinda low to snipe when the other group has done all but 1 of the previous 74 chapters (MadCat and Wordrain are both Cloww). Other than that, keep up the good work!