Love is Still Too Early for Himeno-chan - Vol. 3 Ch. 24

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Adorable lmao
Pulling gachas until you get the rare ones is surprisingly young-adult-like too hahha
 
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What's Mafia Kajita doing in this?
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So the secret to gacha is to have someone roll for me because they like me and want to get a good servant for me?

Guess I'll never get a good servant

Hahahahaha
 
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@sergitoto "There are a lot of people here" is referring to the normal rarity monster on the ground, so I don't think "people" is the correct noun.
 
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A suggestion/request—make the translations sound more natural, like they’re coming from native English speakers, and young kids at that. The translations aren’t bad I assume but they aren’t the way that kids talk, especially casually. I don’t know if your proofreader changes word choice and stuff in addition to the grammar/spelling checks, but I suggest you start doing that. It’ll really improve the quality of the chapters even with something as simple as that.

You guys have been improving on that a bit tho, it’s better now than it was before so just keep it up :)
 

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