Ichi the Witch
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Usazaki Shiro deserves this series to blow after what happened with act age
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Just wanna drop my short opinion piece, in this abandoned bucket:
The story starts out with a lengthy exposition, and heavy characterization of the MC as "THE HUNTER", his 1st, and especially his 2nd majik catch, was emphasized to be due to his experience as a hunter (he stalked and researched the lightning-fox for a whole day) ---
But from there? Nothing. Straight up jumping at the majik's face, using all of his explosive magical spells he acquired. No stealth, no stalking, no studying, no preparing traps, nothing. Just full-blown shounen fights with his dick out. What the fuck happened?
Also, what was the point of having a "HUNTER", if the method of capture is arbitrary and whimsical? What does a hunter have to do, with fashioning a dress for a majik? Or "fighting sorrow"? Few majiks would ever have capture-criteria that are hunter friendly. It can easily be: "solve this math problem". The idea that "The MC captures them so fast...! It's because he's a hunter...! Some take years...!" -- ends up complete bogus.
This story has a lot of exposition, and tries to lift the main characters high up in the air, but fails in terms of the actual world-building and lore -- since we sure as hell don't see anyone really struggling.
P.S: People arguing in the comments about "Majo" or "Madan" and I'm like....Really? That's what's bugging you?
The story starts out with a lengthy exposition, and heavy characterization of the MC as "THE HUNTER", his 1st, and especially his 2nd majik catch, was emphasized to be due to his experience as a hunter (he stalked and researched the lightning-fox for a whole day) ---
But from there? Nothing. Straight up jumping at the majik's face, using all of his explosive magical spells he acquired. No stealth, no stalking, no studying, no preparing traps, nothing. Just full-blown shounen fights with his dick out. What the fuck happened?
Also, what was the point of having a "HUNTER", if the method of capture is arbitrary and whimsical? What does a hunter have to do, with fashioning a dress for a majik? Or "fighting sorrow"? Few majiks would ever have capture-criteria that are hunter friendly. It can easily be: "solve this math problem". The idea that "The MC captures them so fast...! It's because he's a hunter...! Some take years...!" -- ends up complete bogus.
This story has a lot of exposition, and tries to lift the main characters high up in the air, but fails in terms of the actual world-building and lore -- since we sure as hell don't see anyone really struggling.
P.S: People arguing in the comments about "Majo" or "Madan" and I'm like....Really? That's what's bugging you?
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