Mahou Shoujo Gakuen no Suketto Kyoushi - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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Mediocre art, story so far is meh, kinda annoying female lead.
Somewhat curious on him being a magic teacher so will give it a few more chapters
 
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I dont mind him being a teacher but i do mind that it looked like he was binded to it...
 
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oyakodom pls

translation is really of or need editing. magic girls academy ? what's that, school for sailor moon ? you can see in other sentences that order of words is wrong too.
 

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mother is more interesting than FMC

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it not fake harem.
sure? any spoiler?
after this "don't leave me alone again"
it looks like first Girl wins story's (+ ~10 Girls as only friends) = fake harem
 
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why didn't he heal her right away and let her properly rest but instead left her injured from the fall and only covering her with a blanket. And only healed her after she woke up? ö.ö
 
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@TTX well i got from animesuki spoiler yeah it not fake harem

i think i read in anime suki he even do "deed" with his harem
 
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"YOU GET IT? MY MOTHER. MY. MOTHER. IS THE CHAIRMAN. SO YOU NEED TO BECOME OUR TEACHER"
 
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I think, on the page 32, i saw Lelouch. Perhaps he was caught by truck-sama, protecting Nunnally.
 
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girls academy?! so the only assholes would be male teachers that are jerks!
 
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Sounds good doesn't work...
In all honesty too much ambition in the art, and although there were a few good scenes (large salamander reveal), the rest is just a hot mess
The art fails in simple realism (knights f.b. scene), and slips in and out of the uncanny valley on character faces (btm. pg.39 eye)
Tries to be showy but there is always a feeling of awkwardness which breaks immersion (large panel bracelet scene, btm. of pg.33)
Fighting on pg. 42 lacks proper co-ordination and framing, and seems amateurish when compared to the complexity of the character detail, as well as perspective error on pg. 44
Plot wise it's a generic cliched development reminiscent of the shoujo genre intermixed lightly with fantasy elements, it tries to incorporate magic, but provides a light, half-hearted introduction/explaination

Overall, the manga feels like a tentative step forward from an amateur who is well versed in character drawing/profiling but lacks solid world building and a compelling narrative
solid 4/10
 
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Oh yeah, and not to shit on the tl or anything but did GD proofread this?
 
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The daughter now has PTSD. Well, seems like we'll read about the new teacher of magic from now on.
 

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