Not to sound ungrateful but...this artist could really use some more figure drawing practice, like fundamentally, studying the basic human form, hand studies, poses, perspective...etc. Hell, even a crappy generic how to draw manga book that only amateurs buy would do wonders. Every character is just skin and bones...sometimes just skin. And the last page has the girls hand only as big as his ear, like that scene out of Deadpool with his tiny baby hand. What is going on...
Y'know what. I take it back. If this is actually a shoujo manga, where guys can have chins as sharp as knives and hands the size of pro basketball players, among other crazy proportions, then this would perfectly align with that.