Mahoui Rex no Hentai Karte - Ch. 19 - Case 19: Magic Stone

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the amount of untranslated spanish sentences in this one is over the top.

it's not that I can't understand them.

it's more showcasing how bad the proofreading is.

Also, the white outerline for black text on black background isn't thick enough, set it to 5px width at least.
 
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I saw a lot of Ds in the sculptor chapter, it was wild that none were censored, maybe because they weren't human ones?
anyway reading this manga gotta give you a strong mindset too
 
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the amount of untranslated spanish sentences in this one is over the top.

it's not that I can't understand them.

it's more showcasing how bad the proofreading is.

Also, the white outerline for black text on black background isn't thick enough, set it to 5px width at least.
This isnt a scanlation. They just chuck the spanish version into AI and let the AI translate and also edit at the same time. Which is why it is so ass and why the AI missed fuck tons of words. It was shit enough to offend me to come out of active scanlation retirement to pick this up
 
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The translation works (it's readable, apart from the untranslated spanish stuff), but the rest of the work surrounding it is not very good, apart from the image quality.
 
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I saw a lot of Ds in the sculptor chapter, it was wild that none were censored, maybe because they weren't human ones?
anyway reading this manga gotta give you a strong mindset too
Yea, censorship law always has weird stupid lines. For Japan law example, genitals = censored, anus = uncensored. For American law, 400 swear word = adult film, 399 words = mature film. Would not be surprise if the wording in Japan law specifically said, censor human genitals.
 
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The untranslated stuff is a bit jarring tbh, though overall it can be read without issue. However, I would honestly recommend to first make a clean version of the chapter without any text at all, and then add the translated text bit by bit. This would effectively remove any chance of leaving untranslated text in.
It also worries me that this is being translated from Spanish, isn't there a RAW available?
Other than that, it was fine. Keep it up.
 
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The untranslated stuff is a bit jarring tbh, though overall it can be read without issue. However, I would honestly recommend to first make a clean version of the chapter without any text at all, and then add the translated text bit by bit. This would effectively remove any chance of leaving untranslated text in.
It also worries me that this is being translated from Spanish, isn't there a RAW available?
Other than that, it was fine. Keep it up.

the person who uploaded this shit version isn't the scanlator, they just a power uploader. so your comment will never reach that other party. As per my comment in this thread, this ENGLISH MTL VERSION is AI. they basically feed the mexican version into AI and the AI did the translation through OCR, the AI did the editing, and the AI did the typeset. it is very low effort. they put it on a website with truck tons of ads to catch the desperate readers.
 
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"If you don't like the idea of a slime going up your vagina"
Doctor. That's the reason she came to your clinic the first go around... And ayup, she's really into the idea.
Kinda surprised slime-kun doesn't have any trauma about having been unbirthed and then stunned and birthed out by this woman.

Also you may want to make some correction.

"It was a young dwarf woman who ran the stall"
Only to be followed in the next page with
"Maybe he doesn't have a fixed place?"

Maybe get yourself a proof reader next time at the very least.
Also, please do not put your website link directly on top of a picture. That's fairly irritating.
Not that I think my feedback here will be listened to. But still.
 
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I am expecting she would soon collaborate with the 3 fujoerofu and the phallic artist
 
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"Dwarf Woman" proceeds to call her a he 3 times on next page, 2 in first panel....
 

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