Make Heroine ga Oosugiru! @comic - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - Citrus Youth

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I've read this before apparently up to ch. 6 but it's been so long this re-read is necessary. And the group re-making their work is just the right thing to force me to re-read from ch. 1.

Having more than one love triangle and losing heroines he encounters is pretty interesting. But I'm liking how he's currently trying to stay away from getting involved (too much) with these people, like an observer and not a player. It's kind of a fresh perspective for the protagonist not being directly in the fray regarding teenage romances.

inb4 this later turns into yet another a harem (composed of losing heroines) for the protagonist, only to generate more losing heroines (double losing heroine, ouch) down the line after he chooses one of them. Hope it doesn't turn out that way. This is one story I would very much not want to be a harem or even a love triangle if there's to be any romance in this.
 
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Konda understand mizu feels in this chapter, its pretty annoying that your precious lone time and neatly schedule ruin by some meddlesome nobody
 
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raws are up to ch13
nothing changed

the manga is good, but the romance is happening to others, protagonist is in the third person view; and I think it's the whole point of it, it's showing the outside view
You... Did you just fucking spoil without a second thought?
 
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Dude, the childhood friend never wins. I need a story where the childhood friend wins
 
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Dude, the childhood friend never wins. I need a story where the childhood friend wins
They exist. They're mostly of the "you saved me when we were little and, even though we were quickly separated, I've never forgotten you and either I've tracked you down for high school or fate somehow brought us back together" genre, but there are plenty of these.

Or they're 16-20 page one-shots of... a certain type... where the childhood friends win at an astonishing rate.
 
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One of these doesn't really meet the "losing heroine" label unless we're talking about her halting and somewhat stalled attempt at a relationship with the ML here.

Zombie StuCo girl quietly becomes closer and closer to ML over time and even accepts his Christmas date invite (with all the implications therein). It's just a ruse, though, hatched by the current and former Lit Club presidents to repair her fractured relationship with her former best friend. She's a bit bummed it wasn't a "real" Christmas date but, even so, her appreciation of the ML continues to rise.
Now that i think about it, the "half" is more Basori, who only hints at her feelings toward Nukumizu in his presence while burying her conscious understanding of those feelings behind, first, an extremely thin veneer of resistance toward anything even mildly stimulating and then, later, an obsession with preserving his chastity from perceived attack by both girls and boys. Shikiya-senpai after V4 is a full-fledged losing heroine in her own right thanks to Nuku's self-deprecating nature not allowing him to take her asking him to date (without a confession) seriously.
 
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Don't they remember how Hans and Anna ended up? It's not a really romantic song, if you watched the movie; quite concerning, in fact...
 
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They exist. They're mostly of the "you saved me when we were little and, even though we were quickly separated, I've never forgotten you and either I've tracked you down for high school or fate somehow brought us back together" genre, but there are plenty of these.

Or they're 16-20 page one-shots of... a certain type... where the childhood friends win at an astonishing rate.
Yeah, the truth is that "winning" isn't about being the childhood friend or not, but (usually) the first girl troope
 

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