Alright copy paste from reddit for my hot takes for this manga, i actually want it go to another revamp from the start:
Personally, i dont like how the story goes especially from the one-shot version(The very one-shot ver with artist, Ashigaki Tei). I prefer if it's about Kimura-Manaka growing relationships instead of making it into Kimura's harem, which personally kinda shot down the original premise about Kimura trying to help Manaka wins the Ei cup, but instead Manaka decided to step down from Ei cup, and pursue Kimura. I know it's probably gonna become a short one instead if it's going very vanilla like that. But adding this weird harems of Ei, even Takabi herself into Kimura is just confusing for me, and makes the story more complicated than what it needs.