Seriously, the tone of this is so fucked up. He delights in pretty much raping her at night then acts all bashful like he has a legitimate emotional interest in her during the day. And that flip switches switches at the slightest provocation.
I don't know what to make of this. It feels like it was written by some angry weirdo who thinks it's everyone else's fault he can't get girls because he's a "nice" guy. I'm kind of interested in it now in a car crash sort of way, but it also sorta makes my skin crawl.