Maou Gun Saikyou no Majutsushi wa Ningen datta

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okay so lets start with I'm very interested in the premise...
and yet 20 pages in and despite dedicating like half of those to 'its so dangerous you cant let your identity become known' in 5 pages, 2 completely separate people uncover it.
Seriously?
 

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the premise is nice but the execution keeps falling flat
 
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@Cae like so many other isekai before it.
I've come to expect and accept weak execution from my isekai, but I read them nonetheless.
 
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at first, I was thinking that this stuff is good, when i see the story and the art is also quite good.

BUT after i keep reading till this chapter (5). i found this just some shit MC with his Naive Cancer Brain who thinks that he can save the world without killing his enemy in war or in self-defence.


with some bullshit plot of
"I am HUMAN but grow up in Monster territory, so i want to create world with HUMAN and Monster live peacefully".

What i can't accept is how the Author/Artist try to show us about MC is a smart person. But only his NAIVETY that vivid to my eyes.

not to mention a dickless brain of him, who got shy everytime seeing a naked female body.
well, as always Japanese MC for you.
 
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A few things about this story that won't age well:

1) The whole secret about being a human and the mask wearing gimmick. Not aging well. After six chapters, there's already like two people who know the secret and two potential people that may know. All female. Which is fine, given the harem tag. However one of the females looks exactly like a human yet is part of the "demon/monsters" and doesn't have to wear a mask. Why does he?
2) The whole him not killing his enemies thing despite being in a war. What's worse, you discover it's not just him, but then in chapter 6 you learn the Demon Queen (I have no idea why they call a female Demon/Monster leader Demon King still when there's a title for a female equivalent of King, it's Queen), I digress. You find out the Demon Queen has also sent out a mass order for the demons to not kill humans or perhaps it's lost in the translation and she simply meant spare as many as she could. Which is a contradiction to what you learn before about the Demon Queen getting suspicious about the MC sparing humans.
Yeah, these two things won't age well and I suspect, at least, #1 will fall away at some point while #2 continues for reasons.

Beyond that, you have the classic MC that's afraid of women in a harem no less. At least two are tossing themselves at him and he has the will of steel to avoid their advances. One, I can give him a pass on since she may not know his secret, but one does and doesn't seem to care. Yet, even with that why does he have to act so shy in front of a naked woman, especially when its said in the story that the latter does this type of thing regularly and he's supposedly "used to it" by now?

Aside from that, there's not much else to say about the story. It's only six chapters in .
 
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ofcourse Maou would be a young woman given the MC is like that.. sigh
 
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MC is fucking doormat, the author should shoot himself in face. and how the hell does it manage to get 7.62 rating.
 
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lets leave aside most of the bland remarks, is noone going to point out that as soon as the Maou appeared noone thought "wait a second, ain't that the maoh from Maoyuu Maoh Yuusha!?"
 
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FINALLY, ANOTHER ISEKAI TRASH #1804598INFINITY

Seriously, someone's got to count how many of these things are coming out, BUT like most isekai TRASH, it's best to be consumed with your head turned off. A bland story with barely any unique premises that relies heavily on tropes that other stories have already worked and reworked on for ages. That said, I am trash too and love to waste my time reading dumb things like this.

SOLID TRASH/10
 
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The story was ok so far, and here we are guys, mc has the power of guuuuuuuuuuuns.
The sacred trinity of virginity, naive mc and fireweapons is completed, we can drop the generic isekai.
 
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Guns ruin everything, a unnatural force that can make a weakling, that should die under the laws of nature and Darwin, defeat a alpha enemy.
 

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