Maou to Yuusha no Tatakai no Ura de - Ch. 14 - Concerns and Arrangements VII

[MangaDex]

 

[zokoi19]

"why you keep blabbering"
"you need cleanse yourself before going to walk a long ass day"

literally just the first page and the translation already feels wonky. I'm not saying this is MTL but the quality is just, really bad.
And learn some typesetting, or at least switch to another easier-to-read font.

also, did you snipe this series just so you can beg ask for donations from readers? Real creative of you.

 

[Toon_Jay]

Yeah no, I'm not reading this garbage TL.

 

[Julsmit]

what´s with the freaky text in that one page bro? did you snipe an incomplete page?

 

[CrimsonWarden]

Yeah. I thought I was having an aneurysm.
Had to double-check who uploaded this and now, I'm gonna wait for a different TL

 

[Idefirka]

Tis' was a fleeting moment of happiness, 'fore I looked at the state of the translations....

 

[yoshiii]

 

[Marrdreg]

It's not terrible(right dark sets the standard there...), but it's not a good translation either; I'm likely only understanding it as well as I am because I've read the novels recently. You're getting present tense and past tense mixed up, and verbs wrong too. It also seems like you're asking for donations at the end, but even that isn't well conveyed.

 

[Le_Flemard]

This chapter has been delayed on MangaDex and will be available in 7m.

How are you guys able to read it already?

 

[bravelittlecomma]

How are you guys able to read it already?

Oh interesting. Maybe some bug with timezones?

 

[AlphaN3RDsIgMa]

Please delete this chapter and wait for a better TL to not butcher this holy shit. Please, there are other series go snipe something else or at least proof read your own work while sober.

Swear to God this reads like how my local schizophrenic crack addict rambles to himself.

 

[Wolvenworks]

Eh, it’s readable.

 

[OgretailFood]

Same

Edit: I mean, I still appreciate the upload

 

[hiruma1]

what??? you guys think it's worst??? english is not my main language but it's readable wtf?

 

[cryum]

Why is there suddenly a wordart colorful text in the middle of the chapter and nowhere else?

Zeverion left his name in the last page of the actual chapter.

The text is readable, but capitalization, tense, grammar and possibly some other things are all over the place. So it would be more accurate to say that it's shockingly readable for something that fails in most metrics.

 

[Nemo2342]

Yeah definitely wait for Nitreon's version

 

[sdarkpaladin]

I thought I was the only one thinking the translation seems awful...

 

[LordofLeechers]

what??? you guys think it's worst??? english is not my main language but it's readable wtf?

It's legible, but a series like this, which involves a lot of planning and talking, requires a higher standard of TL.

 

[darkgunner]

Thank you for the scan! It might not be the best translation (the previous translator did a really really good job), but this is also appreciated.

 

[NiTeoN]

This whole thing leaves me baffled in so many aspects... Like, the font choice is awful, but the dude put in the effort to change the font for when the characters are shouting (but both times they are different fonts??). They also went through the effort of translating some minor dialogues that they could've just as easily ignored... but didn't translate others.

And they even put in the effort to clean the panels and redraw when necessary, but they used really weird techniques in each instance, like fucking up the reflection of the teacup or the BG and Werner's shoulder in page 24. Yet they put in the effort of coloring it with screentones instead of the pure color.

Page 23 really blew my mind. In that page they did a pretty decent job redrawing the bloodstained floor - just to use RAINBOW font there.

All in all, I think they focused on the wrong things while neglecting the more important ones, like typesetting and grammar. I'd be really happy if another group took up translating this series, but this is not it.