Meccha Shoukan Sareta Ken

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WN translations seems to have been dropped but at least the manga's still being translated, can't wait for the next chapter~!
 
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Don't trust the high rating. This manga is 4/10 for me. -1 more because of bad art but art can become better over time.

Here's my attempt to fix the story, mc has to stay at least 30 days in a world before being summoned again. That way the story would be more interesting because we would see many types of world to explore and interact with but with a 1 month limit. Each world has to have unique properties/environment/magic system/culture/dangers/language/tools/vehicles. And there had to be some kind of restrictions. The mc has to learn all of them to survive in each world. To make things more interesting, mc won't get his power/skills before completing a certain task in each world. Or, mc's power could be restricted to be only usable in that world. This way, mc won't ever had the chance to smile like a chuuni. Instead his face will be more like subaru from re:zero because he should think things over and strategies before doing anything. But the cons is, author will have to think for a new, plot-armorless, unique world many times over. The pros: author will have infinite arc to work on and they will still be logical and interesting.
 
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...The main character was despicable since especially the fifth summon if not the fourth....
 
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It's really good! I like how his powers aren't too overpowered. Even if they were, I don't think it would be too much of a problem because his powers seem to be balanced by the plot. We'll see how long this stays true, but the start was quite good.
 
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its just an isekai manga with a more complicated start. i think itll just become a trash isekai, but who knows. maybe the author will surprise me.
 
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His powers aren't super generic and could be used in fun ways, the plot has potential too but hard to tell if it'll develop in an interesting way.
 
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Aaryazaky plzz.....
Write ur story and post it
The plot is indeed good, but reduse it 15 days..


Plzzzz
 
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the chapter 3 part 1 raw is up boys, we just gotta be a bit patient
 
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Only 2 chapters far atm, but I really like this.

Because it's somehow different in creative ways from most isekai's.

And the artstyle really fits with the tone of this anti-hero tale.
 

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