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@Bramia
I copied this from WritingExplained.org:

It is sometimes said that a person is convinced by an appeal to reason or logic and a person is persuaded by an appeal to feelings or emotions.
This is not necessarily true. Both convincing and persuading can be done through arguments and reason. As I said above, the key difference is between action and nonaction, not what is being appealed to.

But I do agree that "convincing" might be a better word choice seeing that it's not making the target do something, just changing their minds.
 
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@Bramia pretty sure the word you're looking for is "inspire" dawg, persuade in that context was an acceptable word to use. Although it does sound a bit awkward, maybe "Persuade through reason" instead of "reasoning" would have worked better @allenallenallen333 . Either way nice work man!
 
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The political and military organization of this universe make absolutely no sense. Also I think the author forgot to explain why this random kid got selected as the fleet admiral.

Otherwise not a bad read.
 
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I hate it when authors use the term "somehow" in their synopses because that's when you know they used some bullshit premise that's never going to get resolved right at the beginning of the story.
 
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Just finished the 64 first chapters... Meh it's OK-tier. The art style has to be improved coz some of section looks like the characters are "statue" they don't move in action and their facial expression are quite bad, not bad but it could be better
And this thing I hate but really this thing ! The MC oh god, he was some random Guy with no balls and overnight he became that """badass""" even his hair style / eyes changed lol seriously I would prefer by far his innocent way at the beginning because damn here we just have a badass cliché MC who just save girls "because Wow someone threatening a girl is bad" and "oooh there is a random bitch Guy wants bullying a girl omg I have to step in coz that's my way of being badass" >_> Sounds like a bad parody of Nicky Larson (sorry dude you don't deserve that)

Hope it's gonna move on an other way than the actual 64 first chapters
 
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*amused & joking*
If Dragon Queen ever somehow ended up in Warhammer 40k, she'd be able to unite every Ork in the galaxy under her control.

I mean, just look at the size of that hat of hers! Every ork knows that the one with the biggest, fanciest hat is obviously The Boss.
 
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Loved seeing Golden Hamster with Dragon Queen's hat on. Just that little bit of slapstick is what keeps this fun to read the next chapters ?
 
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i didnt know what to expect when i started this but its lit
 
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it's such a great manga it's just soo sad that other's site's get more views on eks.
https://mangakakalot.com/manga/jc917903 (up to 40 thousand views and up)
https://kissmanga.com/Manga/Iron-Ladies
https://www.mangareader.net/iron-ladies (did get it this year)
https://mangabat.com/manga/serie-1088914570


I'm pretty sure he has said he's just posting on Mangadex or great star (allenallenallen333)
 
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Year of the pig eh? Guess they'll have a picture of the old professor at the end this time around then.
 
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Let me be the first to say it:

WOOF WOOF
WOOF WOOF,
WOOF WOOF
WOOF WOOF.
 
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@TikiTau that sounds suspiciously heretikal. Present yourself before the nearest commissar for interrogation at his earliest convenience.
 

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