The pacing is bad, it is too rushed.
Plus point for space setting, some originality here.
Bad battle scene, it didn't showcase pilot's skill, just his over reliance on overpowered ship.
Generic useless guild existence, I mean they got internet, what the hell is guild for? it should have gone obsolete centuries ago. There should be Fleets and Associations.
Plus point for a not-sissy main character.
Plus point for a romance that actually got somewhere, though again, rushed.