Honestly disappointed with some of the people in the comments here. The translation is good! Maybe there are some parts that could be phrased a bit better, but nothing here is incorrect or hard to read at all! Plus,
@HttpsSick is more than willing to fix stuff when actually given constructive criticism.
Yeah, there's currently two groups, but I'm sure that will work itself out. In the meantime, people hating on this translation are just putting unnecessary pressure on both of them!
When I first started translating I was also doing everything on my own and yeah, looking back my first chapter was a bit of a mess too. Still, I never had people be this rude in the comments. So I'm kindly asking people to stop, cause it's just rude. There is nothing wrong with this translation at all, so really, there's no reason to act like this. Kinda expected better from this community :/