@Ghajik This needs a bit of QC. Some of the lines are poorly written. Even the very first bubble. It should be "come" if you want to use "you've" or just leave it as "came" and drop the -'ve and just use "you". Although saying "You're finally here, Ikuma" sounds more natural. I don't really want to breakdown every grammatical issue here, so just take this as an example of the kind of work that's needed.
Other than that, thanks for the update.