You did a good job friend, thanks! Just a tiny critic, I think your lettering was small... For your next chapter, doing it bigger should do the trick... Anyway, thanks! 👍
Really good job. Didn't notice any issues while reading the only advice I'd give you is to make the text a little bigger and bolder so it's easier to read. Hope you continue doing more chapters
thanks for the chapter!! even with it being DeepL, everything still seemed pretty good and it was still a fun read. Mostly the text size was the issue but otherwise, all good. Thank you for picking this up ^^
Was a pretty good tl job, altho I would recommend increasing the font size a bit as people with bad eyesight may have some difficulty reading it without zooming in.
It’s confusing why she doesn’t escape temporarily or learn how to temporarily hide herself/the shop.
She continuously acknowledges that her identity and safety is at risk, but refuses to do anything about it until I guess someone has to save her again/ the villagers get hurt and involved again.
Wow rude, if your friend changes something about themselves I think one should be supportive, what if it took them a lot of courage then you just shoot them down like that smh
Thanks for the chapter I think my only minor criticism is it would be nice if font was a bit bigger and filling things out for readability, but it wasn't bad, the translation seemed fine far as I can tell and was grammatically fine.