Milady Just Wants to Relax - Ch. 34 - Chaper 34

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Really good job. Didn't notice any issues while reading the only advice I'd give you is to make the text a little bigger and bolder so it's easier to read. Hope you continue doing more chapters
 
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thanks for the chapter!! even with it being DeepL, everything still seemed pretty good and it was still a fun read. Mostly the text size was the issue but otherwise, all good. Thank you for picking this up ^^
 
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Called by the Baron i see althou I doubt the poor Baron even have any choice but to do it lmao
 
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Was a pretty good tl job, altho I would recommend increasing the font size a bit as people with bad eyesight may have some difficulty reading it without zooming in.
 
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It’s confusing why she doesn’t escape temporarily or learn how to temporarily hide herself/the shop.

She continuously acknowledges that her identity and safety is at risk, but refuses to do anything about it until I guess someone has to save her again/ the villagers get hurt and involved again.
 
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Wow rude, if your friend changes something about themselves I think one should be supportive, what if it took them a lot of courage then you just shoot them down like that smh
 
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Thanks for the chapter :) I think my only minor criticism is it would be nice if font was a bit bigger and filling things out for readability, but it wasn't bad, the translation seemed fine far as I can tell and was grammatically fine.

I sure wonder what the Baron wants with her.
 
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Thanks for picking this up and translating it! ☺️👍

As for the humans she's afraid of meeting, it really says something about them if someone is more afraid of them than a literal demon 😒
 
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What is that word translate to when they all smell the sage? (About page 4.)
 
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Tysm for the chapter! May I suggest using CAPS writing and a bigger font size to make it more readable?
 

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