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All in all, a great story with some minor flaws
A pretty funny story, but it was a bit rushed when the hunting arc began.
The villainess, despite how hyped up she was, was a completely flat character and dealt with in a manner that felt like it was offscreen, like, her entire existence could've been stricken from the story and it wouldn't have changed anything, which was rather disappointing to perceive.
Also Ibelin's arc was ended rather unsatisfactory, with it not being clear whether she eventually grew up or not and her being barely involved at the ending.
Well, Latte and Arwin at least finished their parts properly and Bishot&Esula was pretty cute, so at least the main parts were properly finished, even if some things fell to the wayside.
The villainess, despite how hyped up she was, was a completely flat character and dealt with in a manner that felt like it was offscreen, like, her entire existence could've been stricken from the story and it wouldn't have changed anything, which was rather disappointing to perceive.
Also Ibelin's arc was ended rather unsatisfactory, with it not being clear whether she eventually grew up or not and her being barely involved at the ending.
Well, Latte and Arwin at least finished their parts properly and Bishot&Esula was pretty cute, so at least the main parts were properly finished, even if some things fell to the wayside.
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