Mon Seul

[ExarchOfAfrica]

Never dissapoint /a/. The characters were fine, I actually quite enjoyed seeing the dysfunctional family try to make amends with itself. The art work was fine too, it showed scenes as it needed to and fit the dark theme of the story. The length was very good, a simple story that didn't need many chapters although ne of two more would have been better. The biggest thing was, uuuh, that. Its not gore. Its not necessarily out of place for a story with characters who evidently need serious help, especially the sister. But dear god its still disgusting seeing that guy take advantage of her when he clearly knows he shouldn't have. I assume the author doesn't actually condone that garbage. She evidently suffered greatly from it, even years ahead of her life. Since the author isn't condoning this I can narrowly give this story a fairly positive rating, but only narrowly.

7/10.

 

[viggibanx]

This is such a great story,you can be uncomfortable with dark writing of the story but calling it shit is a false statement. Why do people act like every story must cater to their preferences? This a a top tier.

 

[adamb15]

Read this a long time ago and revisited it now. Heh, love it when every character needs therapy.
The author was a woman??

Kodomo no jikan, it is not. Kind of.

 

[Chris2999]

What a fucking terrible story, kid is dumb but she is a kid so we can forgive that, the father is irresponsible and cowardly as fuck and the friend is a disgusting predator. The ending is just the guy saying, fuck it go ahead and fuck the friend again but now the friend doesn't want her why? she is too old now? Fuck you. The fact that the friend did not have a terrible and painful dead pisses me off.