Moto Ansatsusha, Tensei Shite Kizoku no Reijou ni Narimashita - Vol. 1 Ch. 3.2 - Rosemary (2)

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A bit disappointed we didn’t really see what happened after she got to eat mud. It feels like it skips quite a bit of content or it likes going fast forward into the next plot point without much depth.
It's the end of chapter, and there's no aftermath.
In the LN, this is where Serena and Rosemary finally time skips to 12 years old (so yes, she starts murdering people at much younger age).

Also, the LN skips detail about her murdering her target. There's a little thought not being sure about why she reached out to the boy. But the scene just skip to when she is giving job report to Rick. The LN actually skips a lot from scene to scene, so people who prefer getting all the minute details probably wouldn't be satisfied.

Let me guess. It's the guy that killed her in previous life? It's it that predictable or now, will see. If someone is reading LN, please spoil it for me
About the knight who died with her in the previous life... for better or worse, he's done. Serena still remember his words every now and then because she still can't understand why someone would throw their life for another person. She is a believer in "all man for himself". But until the end, he never show up in the story anymore. Even if he is reincarnated, the author say nothing about it, so he's as good as dead dead.

About love interest...
Officially, there are two love interest in the LN version. One is Tigur, the boy she rescued. The other is Evan, the kingdom's first prince. But Serena is a protagonist, she got that curse we're already so familiar with, not realizing when someone love her.

Tigur loves her because she rescued and accepted him (should be in the next chapter). He gets worried when she's endangering herself, and gets annoyed when another man approach her, or being rude to her. Serena's father acknowledged his potential, and Bruce (the dog) remarked the "Monster" (Serena) smiles when around her servant, even if she probably didn't realize it. IMO, his position helps to tell parts that need outsider opinion rather than just Serena's internal monologue.
But the plot didn't get overhauled enough to make him integral part rather than attachment.

Evan is the only route in the WN, although Serena herself never realize she had anything special going. She only really snaps when Evan got gravely injured in an event, she is annoyed enough to go to the culprit and kill that woman with her own hand.
The WN ends with Serena and Evan kissing, but in the LN, Tigur sabotaged by telling her first that her feeling is the same as a kid who is upset because someone break her favourite toy, rather than a woman who is angry because the man she love is hurt. So the competition is still open.
 
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I don't mind you advertising your other works, but you've been doing it almost every update and the one you mention hasn't been updated in two months.
 
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I don't mind you advertising your other works, but you've been doing it almost every update and the one you mention hasn't been updated in two months.
They caught up to the RAW of that series. So they can't release another until the mangaka does.
 
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@SS_TT I have in fact read that other series you're working on and am sad there hasn't been an update for a while.
 
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This has a similar premise to the other reincarnated murder loli series from these scanlators, but the story quality is vastly inferior.
 
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Thanks for the translation!

I kind of dislike this manga and will hold on a bit longer. I dropped a comment on the main manga page itself. I'm on my way to dropping the manga, but at least I saw the entire premise play out (in entirety if the spoiler above is right).
 
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hmmm, I'm interested in this one but it does give me a similar (but not as bad) vibe as So I'm a Spider does as it approaches it's end in all versions. Basically, a traditional tragedy where a bunch of people have character flaws that are going to lead them to ruin and, instead of reading to see how they turn it around, you read to see how it all falls apart.

The doesn't understand that, however you end up with a kid, you can't treat them so differently, doesn't matter if ones adopted or a step kid.

Mother prioritizes her feelings and impressions over her family. I've seen parents be afraid of their kids. It's a terrible move, never do it (or at least don't let them know).

adopted daughter knows how to manipulate but not plan. That's normal for a kid but if normal kid behavior never lead to death, they wouldn't need parents.

Mc is too set in her assassin mindset and doesn't try to blend in at all. It's also over dramatic to go for the kill for a charging dog. They're animals, not humans. They won't continue the press the attack once they realize that they got the predator/prey dynamic backwards. A swift kick to the stomach from even a child would send it away crying. Responding to every threat with maximum retaliation just makes for future attacks, and they'll feel justified next time too. Take a measured approach and assess if you need to kill (you usually don't with domesticated animals). Same could be said with the sister. Decide on a course of action to resolve the situation, not one that is satisfying. (this parts longer only cause it's harder for people to understand and people get hyped about making these exact mistakes.)

That said, I don't hate that the story is like this. I don't consider any of the characters all that likeable, so it won't be like kumoko where I'll start getting bad vibes then my favorite character dies, followed by a series of tragic ends for anyone but the most unlikable character who inexplicably wins. I don't expect any of them to change and kinda don't want them to (too much). I want to see the situation crumble, even though anyone one of them could start the process of fixing everything if they got their shit together.
 
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The story is bland, but the dialogue is snappy enough that I enjoy it anyways. Keep up the good work! The other assassin manga is better but they both don't release that frequently so it's good to have more content.
 
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It's the end of chapter, and there's no aftermath.
In the LN, this is where Serena and Rosemary finally time skips to 12 years old (so yes, she starts murdering people at much younger age).

Also, the LN skips detail about her murdering her target. There's a little thought not being sure about why she reached out to the boy. But the scene just skip to when she is giving job report to Rick. The LN actually skips a lot from scene to scene, so people who prefer getting all the minute details probably wouldn't be satisfied.

About the knight who died with her in the previous life... for better or worse, he's done. Serena still remember his words every now and then because she still can't understand why someone would throw their life for another person. She is a believer in "all man for himself". But until the end, he never show up in the story anymore. Even if he is reincarnated, the author say nothing about it, so he's as good as dead dead.

About love interest...
Officially, there are two love interest in the LN version. One is Tigur, the boy she rescued. The other is Evan, the kingdom's first prince. But Serena is a protagonist, she got that curse we're already so familiar with, not realizing when someone love her.

Tigur loves her because she rescued and accepted him (should be in the next chapter). He gets worried when she's endangering herself, and gets annoyed when another man approach her, or being rude to her. Serena's father acknowledged his potential, and Bruce (the dog) remarked the "Monster" (Serena) smiles when around her servant, even if she probably didn't realize it. IMO, his position helps to tell parts that need outsider opinion rather than just Serena's internal monologue.
But the plot didn't get overhauled enough to make him integral part rather than attachment.

Evan is the only route in the WN, although Serena herself never realize she had anything special going. She only really snaps when Evan got gravely injured in an event, she is annoyed enough to go to the culprit and kill that woman with her own hand.
The WN ends with Serena and Evan kissing, but in the LN, Tigur sabotaged by telling her first that her feeling is the same as a kid who is upset because someone break her favourite toy, rather than a woman who is angry because the man she love is hurt. So the competition is still open.
Can you share where you found the novels?
 
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As much as I dislike the adopted sister, the real villain is the mother.
A dumb bitch who cannot take responsibility.
 
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So... is this story ever going to do anything? The family story with the adopted sister is paint-by-numbers standard issue villainess stuff. And her being an assassin is boring, flat, borderline edgelord stuff. It's like to great big generic, vanilla plot types combined into a generic vanilla megazord of a story that just doesn't deliver anything we haven't seen before in any way that's unique enough to be worth attention.

Also why is there a "romance" tag on this? If we're caught up to the raws then what in these first few chapters even began to hint that there's a romance subplot? The MC is an emotionless murder machine, the sister is a vapid manipulative shrew, and the parents don't count.
 
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So... is this story ever going to do anything?
Honestly speaking, don't expect it will get better.
It's just something for when you got time to waste.

Repeating a comment from elsewhere, it's that kind of story where the author got a rough idea and major scenes, then write it down with focus on those fragments only. There will be a lot of skipping between those scenes.
It doesn't have the patching every plot hole and hammering consistency issue more demanding readers who wrongly expect from a deeply thought and well written story (it's not).
A glaring example is it doesn't even seamlessly integrate the character not existing into the LN so often it doesn't feel like he's even there, and suddenly return to existence when he got a line.
The author dropped the WN once, but return because it has readers who want the continuation.
 
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This has got to be one of, if not the worst mother I have seen in a manga. Like bruh.
 
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damn this is hard
I don't sympathise with the nobility
I sympathise less with cold hearted killers
 

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