Mr. Clice - Vol. 6 Ch. 23 - Great War Under the Sea

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Whoops it's already up, eh! Thanks again for the help, Lardagus and ak-scans.

And that's volume 6 done! Hope you guys enjoyed it! Please look forward to the next volume as well XD
 
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Thanks for the update! Dam Clice was acting like a spoiled woman at the start only to remember he needed to still turn back into a guy in the end 😂

Hopefully the chief manages to get even more creative to stop that from happening lol
 
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Thanks for the update! Dam Clice was acting like a spoiled woman at the start only to remember he needed to still turn back into a guy in the end 😂

Hopefully the chief manages to get even more creative to stop that from happening lol
It's like the JST is trying to slowly sissyhypno Clice lol
 
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Page 25, upper right panel, upper speech bubble. "countries" should be "country".

Same page, upper left panel, leftmost speech bubble. "figured" should be "figure".

Same page, lower right panel, upper right speech bubble. Remove the "is".

Page 52, bottom panel, right speech bubble. An "is" should be between "place" and "gonna".

Anyways!

Would have preferred a close up of Grace and Clice squishing their boobs against each other.

That giant squid deserves a medal.
 
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It's like the JST is trying to slowly sissyhypno Clice lol
They certainly already tried that in the Thailand chapter XD. I won't be surprised if they didn't give up yet.

Page 25, upper right panel, upper speech bubble. "countries" should be "country".

Same page, upper left panel, leftmost speech bubble. "figured" should be "figure".

Same page, lower right panel, upper right speech bubble. Remove the "is".

Page 52, bottom panel, right speech bubble. An "is" should be between "place" and "gonna".
Dang it, I still missed some, huh. Rookie mistakes as well. Thank you for informing us and terribly sorry about it. I've informed Lardagus about it and we will try to fix it ASAP.

Would have preferred a close up of Grace and Clice squishing their boobs against each other.
The J.S.T. apparently requested such shot before but got refused firmly by Clice. The studio in the H.Q. is still left in tatters and unusable even now.

That giant squid deserves a medal.
This thing sure fuels my Thalassophobia XD. Did you guys know that there have been real giant squid attacks on small ships and small submarines? They rarely swam near the sea surface, but daeem, just imagining these creatures suddenly lunges at you on a boat sure gives me a chill. Brrr!

Still worth a medal, I guess.
 

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