Mr. Mallow Blue - Vol. 4 Ch. 25

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Page 22: Shouldn't it be "I want to see more colours" ?
Page 37: "had became" > "had become" or "became"

Anyway, love this story. And the colored pages are beautiful.
 
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thanks for the translation!

finally found someone who cherished her... im really holding out that the two can patch up their falling out, with sakura in her own body
 
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Bruh. Trash parents. No wonder she turned out like that. Poor girl :/

And the art is exquisite man!
 
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This was an any% speedrun of an entire yuri plot and this was just the character's backstory. The author is literally trying to engineer the gayest story possible.
 
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You not reading the entire manga or what? Half of this chapter has been seen before from a different perspective.
lol right there wasnt a gigantic chunk of characterization missing or anything
Mad face girl has just been protrayed as a grumpy bitch for no particular reason the entire time
And now we speedrun a "cant see color" trauma porn subplot about her
The comparison between this and cantseefacesman is hilarious
 
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And now we speedrun a "cant see color" trauma porn subplot about her
The comparison between this and cantseefacesman is hilarious
Because if it was revealed or explained earlier there would be no mystery, dipshit.
Most of the story has been Aoi and Minazuki trying to piece together Sakura's actions. We are meant to be as in the dark as them.
We knew she was suicidal in the other side of this story. We knew why she latched on to Yume, why she wanted Minazukis body specifically and now we have a backstory explaining how she got to this point.
Her history ties into the ideas of being able to see again, of being used, and discarded at the convienience of others
 
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Because if it was revealed or explained earlier there would be no mystery, dipshit.
Most of the story has been Aoi and Minazuki trying to piece together Sakura's actions. We are meant to be as in the dark as them.
We knew she was suicidal in the other side of this story. We knew why she latched on to Yume, why she wanted Minazukis body specifically and now we have a backstory explaining how she got to this point.
Her history ties into the ideas of being able to see again, of being used, and discarded at the convienience of others
Author totally planned this™ doesnt change the fact that its cheap and rushed as shit.
Her stepdad tried to rape her, and her mom beats her, and her new boyfriends hit on her too, and she cant see color and and and and all in a single fucking chapter lmfao is this boys abyss or some shit? Comical.
 

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