Musket Girls! ~Tensei Sanbou to Senretsu Otome-tachi~ - Ch. 13

[fazmkdr]

I normally hate flashback chapters but this one was pretty sweet. I haven't left a comment yet, but seriously thank you so much for these chapters. Ever since the first few chapters of this were uploaded, I have consistently checked back on it to see if we ever got more. Getting 3 chapters in a week is like an early Christmas present, thank you so much man

Join our discord channel for more and early updates!

 

[Toon_Jay]

I have a few rules when I'm translating:
1. Use your liberty to interpret instead of just literally translate
2. Try to personalize each characters voice, the words they use should be distinct
3. For Musket Girls, try to emulate napoleonic era novels and the words they use
4. Whenever possible, insert memes

I really appreciate your translation (and it's pretty good), but please don't insert memes x.x It's jarring and breaks immersion.

 

[fazmkdr]

I really appreciate your translation (and it's pretty good), but please don't insert memes x.x It's jarring and breaks immersion.

The original translation was "I took a bullet to the knee", I can't help changing bullet to arrow I'm so sorry

 

[xanketsu]

He sounded like Ford to you?

Sounds like Connery to me. Lol.

 

[MangaRoller]

The original translation was "I took a bullet to the knee", I can't help changing bullet to arrow I'm so sorry

You could do what some other groups do, and add one or more extra pages at the end that contains the meme dialogue . That way we get the accurate translation and you still get to add memes.

 

[lazyman26]

I have a few rules when I'm translating:
1. Use your liberty to interpret instead of just literally translate
2. Try to personalize each characters voice, the words they use should be distinct
3. For Musket Girls, try to emulate napoleonic era novels and the words they use
4. Whenever possible, insert memes

i like your #4

 

[RanmaChaos]

So many chapters, so quickly! Thank you so very much

 

[FlexSeal]

Thank you for the chapter. Yuuiner & Grandpa makes the greatest team of all time.

 

[Shitty]

Peak is back!! I love this series, you guys have any idea how to buy the manga from overseas? I wanna support the author

Also thanks for the TL I've been waiting so long for this!!!

 

[Shitty]

I have a few rules when I'm translating:
1. Use your liberty to interpret instead of just literally translate
2. Try to personalize each characters voice, the words they use should be distinct
3. For Musket Girls, try to emulate napoleonic era novels and the words they use
4. Whenever possible, insert memes

A discord server would be nice, I'd like to keep updated )

 

[MondSemmel]

Thanks for the chapter!

Typos & edit suggestions: @fazmkdr

• p6 was just the way things were -> was just the way of things
• p8 sharp one kid -> sharp one, kid
• p8 come with me if you're interested -> come with me if you're interested.
• p10 that's way worse -> That's way worse
• p12 Just two copper coins? That's double what you had -> [Yuiner had two coins, so this reward is not double what he had.]
• p25 In an instant, He knocked -> In an instant, he knocked
• p25 knocked away the knife, took away the guy's fingers with it -> knocked away the knife, took away the guy's fingers with the hidden blade in his cane
• p26 you old man -> you, old man
• p26 not mentioning about -> not mentioning
• p29 won't survive on my own -> can't survive on my own
• p30 "grandson" right -> "grandson", right
• p30 here's your remaining -> here are your remaining

 

[fazmkdr]

A discord server would be nice, I'd like to keep updated )

We have a discord server!

Thanks for the chapter!

Typos & edit suggestions: @fazmkdr

• p6 was just the way things were -> was just the way of things
• p8 sharp one kid -> sharp one, kid
• p8 come with me if you're interested -> come with me if you're interested.
• p10 that's way worse -> That's way worse
• p12 Just two copper coins? That's double what you had -> [Yuiner had two coins, so this reward is not double what he had.]
• p25 In an instant, He knocked -> In an instant, he knocked
• p25 knocked away the knife, took away the guy's fingers with it -> knocked away the knife, took away the guy's fingers with the hidden blade in his cane
• p26 you old man -> you, old man
• p26 not mentioning about -> not mentioning
• p29 won't survive on my own -> can't survive on my own
• p30 "grandson" right -> "grandson", right
• p30 here's your remaining -> here are your remaining

I really need you to proofread on the server, seriously.

 

[Echion]

that looks so bad out of context

 

[IvanDFakkov]

Grandpa has a hidden naginata with him.

 

[trainki]

Thanks for the Translations.
That was a really cool flashback chapter !