Musket Girls! ~Tensei Sanbou to Senretsu Otome-tachi~ - Vol. 1 Ch. 5.1

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I'm happy this is getting translated, honestly thought that it wouldn't get more updates. So I'm really happy!
The MTL is honestly good, there were some minor spelling errors here and there but nothing major.

Yet again, thanks so much for translating this work 🙏🏼❤️
 
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Translation was decent enough, expected worse. May be use “Brugges” instead of Bruges? It might be a reference to the belgian city. Also with “mountain hunters”, just to add a style touch, how about “mountain jagers” (not from German that is jäger, but from Dutch, well the German one could also be). Btw, the officer’s ranks should be written as “Sergeant”,
 
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The fonts were literally listed in the credits page of the last chapter, just use those.
Otherwise, minor grammar/spelling/word choice errors and some very crowded bubbles. Needs work, but thanks all the same.
 

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