Not sure what to comment on the ethics of sniping. But the translation is pretty good, nice job.
But, back to the chapter, this is going waaaay too peaceful. I'm thinking shit's gonna hit the fan anytime soon, and these are the last few moments of joy MC's getting. Wouldn't be surprised if he banged her right here and now (though if I'm being honest, it'd probably be HER banging him).
Also, Kisaragi looking adorable x100 in page 8.