Muteki no Ansatsu Madoushi, Last Boss Musume to Tabi o Suru @COMIC - Vol. 1 Ch. 4

[Homuranagi]

Can't hate the pink thing when her past persona seemed to be built up as a person that's a result of her background maybe forced to do things even. Just raise the kid as a good person, valburga is already dead

 

[jenev]

He should have given her a different name to better separate Val (adult) from Val (child) mentally, and thus be better at treating the child properly in public instead of overreacting. Not to mention public scrutiny from a similarly colored child sharing the same name as a missing WPO leader. Easy to assume she might be a hidden child and him related to said missing person, and report him. Especially since the org knows she's currently a child.

I get that he's on his path of revenge and all but he should be smarter for someone of his caliber. Instead he's acting suspicious everywhere. :|

 

[Pinbat]

the translation is not 100% correct? are you using MTL? i see that your group bio is in indonesian, do you not have a JP translator?

also you should really get a native english proofreader

pg3:
"beutiful" -> "beautiful"
"knit-" -> should be "stare" or "glare", translation is off
"gaps" -> "gasp"
"you must be very helped as her father" -> ???

pg4:
"hriip" -> whatever you want a horse neighing to sound like, just not whatever this is
pg7:
minor but same with the sheep onomatopoeia

pg10:
"[forget it]" -> スルー is more like "ignore it"
"it must be hard for you to move, yeah." -> weird phrasing when you turned "ね！" into "yeah."

pg14:
"kid" -> text is "お嬢ちゃん", young lady
"it's enough" -> text is "これでいい" so "this is fine" or "that will do"

pg24:
"it's hurt" -> "it hurts"
"compared to them" -> "compared to the usual guys" from "いつもの奴ら"

pg25:
"i'm look so damn ridiculous" -> "i look so damn ridiculous/lame" from "ダサ"

pg28:
"professor is here" -> "the professor is over here"

pg29:
"cip cip" -> "chirp chirp"

pg30:
"profesor" -> "professor"

 

[kolotons]

Reminds me of a manga where an exorcist adopts a demon child. It's definitely building up to a climax where Brad makes a decision to kill her or not, so I'm expecting a good portion of the series to be spent on both building a relationship between him and Val and stoking his hatred and lust for vengeance. I really hope the climax explodes in a dramatic way.

So it means they will marry? BASED IF TRUE!

 

[K_Takuya]

So it means they will marry? BASED IF TRUE!

If there was an illiterate world championship you'd give JJK Twitter a run for their money

 

[kolotons]

If there was an illiterate world championship you'd give JJK Twitter a run for their money

Let me live my dream 😭

 

[HiiroMimori]

I still believe there's a misunderstanding here. IDK why I have this feeling, the one behind the arson incident is probably the idiot adventurers that MC helped in chapter 1. They might be seeking revenge because they feel humiliated. This could be wrong, but I'm still bothered by this until the truth is revealed.

 

[19801980]

Good

 

[semur_jamur]

this is interesting so far and im liking it but, damn... it hurts so much...
also i think there's some misunderstanding happening here regarding val.
especially after seeing that other girl that tried to stop him from escaping with val.
her reaction to the word "revenge"... she was confused

my kinda guess is that val only wanted brad to be back normally, wanting to help him and everything
but being a boss, her underling(?) kinda mistood her as "bring him back whatever the cost" or something.

so brad's revenge was actually already avenged by killing the tarsem guy.

 

[Papa420]

Thanks for translation