My Maid, Miss Kishi - Vol. 1 Ch. 4 - Cold

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page1: 'Kiichiro' is misspelled (Kiichioro)
page2: 'Kiichiro' is misspelled (Kiichior)
page5: 'Kiichiro' is misspelled (Kiichior)
 
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one thing is being a ponkotsu another is being a pain in the ass
 
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Page 2 "I am having a hard time for me to move right now". You can reduce this to 'I am having a hard time moving right now'
Page 8 "Everyones' has" Can just be 'everyone has'
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Seems like she wanted to try and change his clothes, but then used the temperature check as cover
 
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Why do i feel that our protag is not clumsy. but cursed in exchange for his fortune.
 
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Aaaaaaaaaaaa Kuudere startled is so cute oh my ...... Why am I so weak
 

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