Namaiki na Gal Ane wo Wakaraseru Hanashi - Ch. 8 - School

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In a twist of fate so rare, beneath a spectral veil,
I found myself ensnared in a ghostly, eerie tale.
While on Discord, I did chat, my thoughts both clear and bright,
An unseen force possessed me, and cloaked me in its night.

Driven by this spectral hand, I wrote with trembling pen,
An apology for the delay, as the chapter’s fate grew thin.
The blackouts that disturbed the spirit caused it restless woe,
A haunting plight that shattered calm, and made my message flow.

With urgency and dread I wrote, as shadows whispered low,
A tale of woe and spectral strife that only you should know.
May this ballad bring you peace, and understanding true,
Of how the spirit’s troubled plight delayed the chapter due.
 
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Ok so this explains why she's 21 & in high school that thought would never get addressed. That being said, the guidance she'll receive will most likely be helpful to her & wouldn't make her feel worse about herself. Plus I'm sure Egaki sensei will make a detailed extra on her free time to illustrate it for people that want to pay her for all the unnecessary hard work she did. Also Egaki sensei should you take my idea & make it come true, I don't want compensation but recognition for it. Thanks for the translations.
 
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Here are some comments from the Japanese public on the Young Jump app:

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これで実は良い先生だったら笑う

I’d laugh if it turned out they were actually a good teacher after all.

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普通にお姉ちゃん良い子で笑顔可愛い。
最後の先生の笑顔は悪そうだったけど。

Normally, the older sister is a good kid with a cute smile.
But the teacher's smile at the end looked kind of sinister.

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おばあちゃんがドキドしちゃうのも納得のいい笑顔

It's a smile that's so good, it's no wonder Grandma gets all flustered.

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お年寄りに親切ないい子や

A good kid who is kind to elderly people.

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あれ、この作品の舞台広島なのね
どっかで説明あったっけ

Oh, the setting of this work is Hiroshima?
Was there an explanation about that somewhere?

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ここでこのにちゃあ先生がめちゃくちゃ生徒思いの良い先生だったら面白そうだけどなんかならなさそうな気がするんだよなぁ、、、

It would be interesting if this teacher turned out to be extremely caring and a good teacher for the students, but somehow it doesn't seem like that's going to happen...

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お姉ちゃんの笑った時の横顔可愛すぎる!! なんで家では弟に対してあんなにトゲトゲしとんやろ?

Her profile when she smiles is just too cute!! Why is she so sharp with her little brother at home?

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お年寄りにやさしい子は良い子

A child who is kind to elderly people is a good child.

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実はいい子ちゃんなのだね〜

Actually, you're a good kid, aren't you~

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ぺぇがデケェよ

Those tits are huge.

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急に広島市内の設定入れ込んでくんなや... これまでの話、全然広島弁なかったと思うんじゃけど...

Don't suddenly throw in a setting in Hiroshima City... I don't think there was any Hiroshima dialect in the story so far...

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一話目で隣の底辺高校に通ってるとかって言ってなかったっけ? 通信の単位制だから4年生ってことか。

Didn't they say in the first episode that they were attending a low-tier high school next door? So, it's a correspondence course with a credit system, which means they're in their fourth year.

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姉ちゃん、この服しか持ってないの?

Hey, do you only have this one outfit?
Edit: In this chapter, she's wearing a tee, skirt, and boots instead of crop top, jeans and sneakers. Although it’s a different outfit, the theme remains consistent, so I see why he didn’t notice.

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お婆ちゃんに優しいのはナイス

Being kind to Grandma is nice.

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弟くんが分からせるための材料がまた現れたか...

Has another opportunity for little brother to make her understand appeared again...?

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次はセクハラ教師がターゲットやろか?

Will the next target be the sexual harassment teacher?

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今更取ってつけたように御老人に対して優しいエピソードを付加されても

Even if you suddenly add a story where they’re kind to the elderly now, it feels too late.

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婆ちゃん可愛い

Grandma is cute.


Additionally, here are the current like counts of the last 4 chapters:

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The grandma is drawn cute. How old is she supposed to be? She's drawn hunched over, so I assume she's a bit up there. But her skin looks super smooth, and her eyes are still sparkly.

Edit: Some people in this thread are saying this is an older man and now I'm unsure. Hanaki is a unisex, but somewhat male-leaning name. Which is weird because "Flower Tree" seems like a very feminine thing in my head, but I'm a total amateur at japanese. They also look fairly androgynous, idfk. Still pretty regardless.
 
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even if the teacher wasn't a 'scumbag' in the foreshadowing, i doubt a 'good' teacher could do much even if he had the best intentions given the 'reputation' of the school or so, i imagine it'd be the kinda school you'd get transferred to staff wise as a 'punishment' or someone who simply gave up/dialed it in as an educator, so to speak lol
 
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even if the teacher wasn't a 'scumbag' in the foreshadowing, i doubt a 'good' teacher could do much even if he had the best intentions given the 'reputation' of the school or so, i imagine it'd be the kinda school you'd get transferred to staff wise as a 'punishment' or someone who simply gave up/dialed it in as an educator, so to speak lol

While I don't think he couldn't do anything, I do think the subversion would be that he looks "creepy" because he's just haggard and tired from being brow beaten by a shitty school system he got stuck with. So less sinister and more jaded. I think at this point she doesn't really need some sort of profound advice or sage wisdom but just needs to see that other people are willing to treat her as an equal and not just a vapid piece of meat to lust after.

Her issues stem almost entirely (from what we've seen thus far) from a crippling lack of self confidence/worth which is why she's such a pushover when it comes to peer pressure. Positive reinforcement would go a long way and it doesn't even have to be piling on praise, just not treating her as lesser or a waste of time. Her brother already demonstrated this simply by reassuring her that despite what she thinks he still views her as part of the family.

But knowing the author the teacher will probably just be a creep and the brother will have to step in and save her again because the premise is "making her understand" and not "broken girl gets her life together".
 
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Say what you will about Zyugoya, but they would have handled this story better.

I'm inclined to agree. Zyugoya's works are all pretty derivative (well the vampire one is actually pretty interesting so far) but people are more lenient when it's ultimately a feel good story that is 90% of the time super wholesome even with some drama.

Bonus points because Zyugoya also uses his manga as a vehicle to push his porn fanbox/socials so it's not like Egaki couldn't do the same.
 

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