Nidome no Jinsei wo Isekai de - Vol. 5 Ch. 24.2 - Seems Like the War is Starting ②

[Yamibi]

70 y.o. - just barely in his strike zone

 

[isaacaba]

????????GANG ????????

 

[Sola]

Forget the retarded author controversy. I can barely stand to even read this chapter because of all the stupid grammatical errors.

Spoiler

"Did my entire vanguard got blown away..."

That should be "Did my entire vanguard get blown away..."

Well, I wasn't expecting quality English given the phrasing and grammar observed in previous chapters from this stellar TL and PR duo. (That's sarcasm, by the way.)
But this chapter seems like it hit a new low in some ways. We're talking about elementary school level verb tenses here. You have to be quite ignorant of basic English grammar in order to screw that up. There were quite a few other errors too, but I'll point out only a few select gems.

First off, I haven't looked at the RAW, but I'm guessing "ore-sama" was used in the example below.
"In a force where the great me is the commander...?" BAD
"In a force with my great self as the commander...?" BETTER
The problem with the first one (used in the chapter) is that it incorrectly uses the object form personal pronoun "me" as the subject.
https://www.ragan.com/5-common-ways-people-misuse-personal-pronouns/
Refer to: Mistake No. 1: Object form used in place of subject form
You can immediately discern that it's wrong by cutting out the part preceding the word "me" and that gives you "me is the commander," and that just looks stupid.

Next.
"I'll personally kill anyone who do so later." BAD
"I'll personally kill anyone who does so later." GOOD
Again, you can immediately discern that it's wrong by isolating a few words "anyone who do."
Since "anyone" acts as a singular subject, the correct verb form is "does."

If you really wanted to use "do," you'd have to rephrase it to something like "I'll personally kill those who do so later."
Since the object "those" is plural, you can use "do."

TL;DR This group's proofreader seems to be quite bad at what they do.

P.S. "Then, so you that can do it in a little better mood and place next time..."
Mixed up the placement of "you" and "that" within the sentence fragment. And to think these errors got past the "Quality Checkers" too.
This be one of "those" groups. (You know, a group in which no member actually knows how to use proper English.)

 

[Korath]

So, did I get it right, that the author basically said the same, as if a German would say the Holocaust didnt happen? Reading this feels like watching Kevin Spacey movies now..

 

[Kaarme]

A kiss from a cute elf is always worth it.

 

[womangadex]

NICE GUYS ALWAYS FINISH LAST ???? Yuck beta MCs

BAD BOYS MC GET ALL THE GOOD GIRLS ????

 

[AzusaAiri]

#11
That Part Got Me.... (I Think She Will Hug Him But...)

 

[Rapala101]

The last page on the last panel is literally me every time I see my friends

 

[kmlshblr]

Crowelle is too cute,

tfw no cute elf girl to kiss me

 

[SotiCoto]

He came for rice... but got sugar instead.

 

[StLL]

That kiss caught me off guard god damn it lucky I didn't I swallowed my drink before it.

 

[_stultus]

that went 0 to 100. ..goodness gracious, I'm looking forward to that kind of situation she's talking about..mhmm ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

 

[Raudhbjorn]

Was that a Hiroshima reference on page 8?

 

[SupremeCommander]

Um, technically she's the one closest to him in age
So she's the most compatible with him romantically
I guess?

 

[rexmundi]

94 and 70 hmm

 

[TheProtectorOfPureHeartedGirls]

Finally, a kiss in this series.
Thankfully, it was better an old man and an old woman.