NTREVENGE - Ch. 45

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The question is whether the demons that stole Asmodeus' power are normal demons or the other deadly sins. I don't know if it would be possible to include this in the work since the other deadly sins don't fit into the genre, unless they are somehow using Asmodeus' power of lust.
 
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Chapter 55: The Substitute Woman

The chapter is a flashback revealing what happened to Azusa. It’s Friday, 11:15 p.m.

Azusa is lying in bed, naked and catatonic, with Mitsuru on top of her. She’s remembering the kiss she saw between the MC and Asuka.

Azusa thinks, "It can’t be helped... I’ve been defiled. Sou-chan wouldn’t like a woman like me either... Nothing matters anymore..."

Mitsuru places his hand on Asuka’s face and says:

Mitsuru: “Today, I’m going to give you lots of love too… Azusa-chan ♡”

Someone starts knocking loudly on the door.

Mitsuru: “Shit! Who is it? I wrote in the chat that I was going to use this room today! Didn’t you see it?”

The knocking continues as Mitsuru gets up to open the door.

Mitsuru: “AH… SHUT UP! SHUT UP!”

Mitsuru opens the door and finds Sawada-sensei, the female teacher from chapter 31, and Akagi-kun, the male student who appeared in chapter 44.

Mitsuru: “STOP THAT! IDIO—! HUH...? SAWADA-SENSEI!?”
Sawada-sensei: “MOVE AWAY!”

Sawada-sensei enters the apartment and walks over to Azusa, who is sitting on the bed hugging her knees.

Sawada-sensei: “What are you doing..?”
Mitsuru: “W-... WHAT’S GOING ON!? THIS IS TRESPASSING! HEY...!”
Sawada-sensei: “SHUT UP!”

Sawada-sensei covers Azusa with a blanket.

Sawada-sensei: “It’s all okay now… Hayami-san…”
Azusa: "...It’s all okay?"
Mitsuru: “Sensei… I don’t know what misunderstanding you have… but what we’re doing is completely consensual…”
Sawada-sensei: “Even if that were true, it’s still an illicit sexual relationship.”

Sawada-sensei hands Azusa’s clothes to Akagi and tells him to take her away.

Sawada-sensei: “Akagi… Take Hayami-san away from here.”
Akagi: "Y-yes... Hayami-san… let’s go!”
Mitsuru: “HEY! WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU’RE DO-!?”

Mitsuru tries to stop Azusa from leaving, but Sawada-sensei grabs his wrist and twists his arm.

Mitsuru: “OUCH, OUCH, OUCH! LET ME GO! YOU SHITTY TEACHER!”
Sawada-sensei: “GO! QUICK!”
Akagi: "Y-yes..."

Akagi rushes through the door with Azusa. As they leave, Azusa spots a girl standing in the hallway — it’s Imai, and she looks pissed. Azusa thinks, "A girl?"

Akagi: “There’s a taxi waiting at the back door!”

Akagi and Azusa get into the taxi.

Akagi: “let’s leave now!”
Taxi driver: "...Okay."
Akagi: “Phew... Everything’s okay now.”

Azusa thinks, “Okay... What’s okay about this? As long as he have those photos, no matter how much I run... it won’t do any good.”

Akagi gives a Joker-like smile as he says the next line.

Akagi: “Everything will be fine, let’s leave it in Sawada-sensei’s hands.”

Back at the apartment with Mitsuru and Sawada-sensei, it was all just an act.

Mitsuru: “That’s enough. Let me go.”
Sawada-sensei: “Yes… it’s fine.”
Mitsuru: “So… who will be Azusa-chan’s replacement?”
Sawada-sensei: “Come in.”

Imai walks in. She looks distressed.

Sawada-sensei: “Miwa Imai. She’s the stupid girl who was harassing your sister.”
Mitsuru: “THIS ONE...?”
Sawada-sensei: “I guess it was just jealousy. I can’t believe she ruined her life over that. At first, she screamed and cried, but now they’ve trained her well.”
Mitsuru: “Are you saying she’s in the same position as you?”
Sawada-sensei: “Don’t compare me to her. I love Toshi-sama… I’m not like this girl who can’t resist because of fear and pleasure.”
Mitsuru: “In my opinion… Both of you are just bitches.”

End of chapter.


Insight:

Welp, that explains why, when the MC told Sawada-sensei about the 'rumor' that Azusa had been raped in chapter 31, she thought, “This is... something I can’t really delve into. I wonder if we can erase those rumors…”

I’m wondering if Akagi is actually Toshi, or if he just works for him…

Also, the conversation between Sawada-sensei and Mitsuru at the end made me wonder if Toshi also has a contract with some demon… It seems like he’s doing something similar to what the MC did with Miku, Sekido, and Hina.

And Azusa’s situation only gets worse… Now, on top of everything else, it looks like she’s going to be held captive. She’ll probably be corrupted and end up loving Toshi, just like Sawada-sensei. Oh well.

Azusa can't catch a break.

But now, it leave no doubt about the sensei behavior back then.

So, we can expected to see some of the other demons (finally) if Toshi is like the mc (very likely, seeing how sensei behave, she has been trained like mc girls)
 
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I really don’t get how Azusa is hung up on MC, considering she still doesn’t know anything about what actually happened when the story started (as far as we know).
 
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Chapter 55: The Substitute Woman

The chapter is a flashback revealing what happened to Azusa. It’s Friday, 11:15 p.m.

Azusa is lying in bed, naked and catatonic, with Mitsuru on top of her. She’s remembering the kiss she saw between the MC and Asuka.

Azusa thinks, "It can’t be helped... I’ve been defiled. Sou-chan wouldn’t like a woman like me either... Nothing matters anymore..."

Mitsuru places his hand on Asuka’s face and says:

Mitsuru: “Today, I’m going to give you lots of love too… Azusa-chan ♡”

Someone starts knocking loudly on the door.

Mitsuru: “Shit! Who is it? I wrote in the chat that I was going to use this room today! Didn’t you see it?”

The knocking continues as Mitsuru gets up to open the door.

Mitsuru: “AH… SHUT UP! SHUT UP!”

Mitsuru opens the door and finds Sawada-sensei, the female teacher from chapter 31, and Akagi-kun, the male student who appeared in chapter 44.

Mitsuru: “STOP THAT! IDIO—! HUH...? SAWADA-SENSEI!?”
Sawada-sensei: “MOVE AWAY!”

Sawada-sensei enters the apartment and walks over to Azusa, who is sitting on the bed hugging her knees.

Sawada-sensei: “What are you doing..?”
Mitsuru: “W-... WHAT’S GOING ON!? THIS IS TRESPASSING! HEY...!”
Sawada-sensei: “SHUT UP!”

Sawada-sensei covers Azusa with a blanket.

Sawada-sensei: “It’s all okay now… Hayami-san…”
Azusa: "...It’s all okay?"
Mitsuru: “Sensei… I don’t know what misunderstanding you have… but what we’re doing is completely consensual…”
Sawada-sensei: “Even if that were true, it’s still an illicit sexual relationship.”

Sawada-sensei hands Azusa’s clothes to Akagi and tells him to take her away.

Sawada-sensei: “Akagi… Take Hayami-san away from here.”
Akagi: "Y-yes... Hayami-san… let’s go!”
Mitsuru: “HEY! WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU’RE DO-!?”

Mitsuru tries to stop Azusa from leaving, but Sawada-sensei grabs his wrist and twists his arm.

Mitsuru: “OUCH, OUCH, OUCH! LET ME GO! YOU SHITTY TEACHER!”
Sawada-sensei: “GO! QUICK!”
Akagi: "Y-yes..."

Akagi rushes through the door with Azusa. As they leave, Azusa spots a girl standing in the hallway — it’s Imai, and she looks pissed. Azusa thinks, "A girl?"

Akagi: “There’s a taxi waiting at the back door!”

Akagi and Azusa get into the taxi.

Akagi: “let’s leave now!”
Taxi driver: "...Okay."
Akagi: “Phew... Everything’s okay now.”

Azusa thinks, “Okay... What’s okay about this? As long as he have those photos, no matter how much I run... it won’t do any good.”

Akagi gives a Joker-like smile as he says the next line.

Akagi: “Everything will be fine, let’s leave it in Sawada-sensei’s hands.”

Back at the apartment with Mitsuru and Sawada-sensei, it was all just an act.

Mitsuru: “That’s enough. Let me go.”
Sawada-sensei: “Yes… it’s fine.”
Mitsuru: “So… who will be Azusa-chan’s replacement?”
Sawada-sensei: “Come in.”

Imai walks in. She looks distressed.

Sawada-sensei: “Miwa Imai. She’s the stupid girl who was harassing your sister.”
Mitsuru: “THIS ONE...?”
Sawada-sensei: “I guess it was just jealousy. I can’t believe she ruined her life over that. At first, she screamed and cried, but now they’ve trained her well.”
Mitsuru: “Are you saying she’s in the same position as you?”
Sawada-sensei: “Don’t compare me to her. I love Toshi-sama… I’m not like this girl who can’t resist because of fear and pleasure.”
Mitsuru: “In my opinion… Both of you are just bitches.”

End of chapter.


Insight:

Welp, that explains why, when the MC told Sawada-sensei about the 'rumor' that Azusa had been raped in chapter 31, she thought, “This is... something I can’t really delve into. I wonder if we can erase those rumors…”

I’m wondering if Akagi is actually Toshi, or if he just works for him…

Also, the conversation between Sawada-sensei and Mitsuru at the end made me wonder if Toshi also has a contract with some demon… It seems like he’s doing something similar to what the MC did with Miku, Sekido, and Hina.

And Azusa’s situation only gets worse… Now, on top of everything else, it looks like she’s going to be held captive. She’ll probably be corrupted and end up loving Toshi, just like Sawada-sensei. Oh well.
This is at least a better developed plot development than "hypnosis you forgor"

EDIT: also I guess now that Mitsuru is caught, he won't be useful to find out where Azusa is taken to. It's gonna be another wild goose chase, huh...
 
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This is at least a better developed plot development than "hypnosis you forgor"

EDIT: also I guess now that Mitsuru is caught, he won't be useful to find out where Azusa is taken to. It's gonna be another wild goose chase, huh...
When they framed Yuuki, Hina's ex-boyfriend, for the girls' kidnapping, Asmodeus visited him while he was locked up at the police station and brainwashed him into taking the blame (end of chapter 27, beginning of chapter 28).

So it would be logical, at least I think it would be—though with this author you never really know—that Asmodeus would now go after information from either Mitsuru or Imai. Especially considering that Asmodeus apparently doesn't know what happened.

It also remains to be seen whether the police will conduct a proper investigation. They can check Mitsuru’s phone, his computer, and, more importantly, they have Imai. And unless there’s another demon contracted to Toshi who’s cast a spell to prevent her from talking, she should know everything.

If Asmodeus doesn’t interfere with the investigation, the police actually have a lot of potential sources to work with to get to Toshi.
 
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When they framed Yuuki, Hina's ex-boyfriend, for the girls' kidnapping, Asmodeus visited him while he was locked up at the police station and brainwashed him into taking the blame (end of chapter 27, beginning of chapter 28).

So it would be logical, at least I think it would be—though with this author you never really know—that Asmodeus would now go after information from either Mitsuru or Imai. Especially considering that Asmodeus apparently doesn't know what happened.

It also remains to be seen whether the police will conduct a proper investigation. They can check Mitsuru’s phone, his computer, and, more importantly, they have Imai. And unless there’s another demon contracted to Toshi who’s cast a spell to prevent her from talking, she should know everything.

If Asmodeus doesn’t interfere with the investigation, the police actually have a lot of potential sources to work with to get to Toshi.
See, Asmodeus has twice now made it so that Azusa's suffering is extended, I don't think that she would be helpful to her now for whatever reason. I feel like she wants Azusa ABSOLUTELY BROKEN, or at least for the MC to keep pursuing her until he finds her too late.
 
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Well not sure if you notice but Asmodeus use brainwash 4x already.
First in chapter 3 on some woman.
Second at the end on chap 24 to fully break Hina.
At the start of 28 on Yuuki.
And on 51 on mc.
We don't know if she's not meesing with others.
In my opinion the real MC of this story is not MC but Asmodeus. She's a master of chessboard. She just move her pawns when she need it and where she need it. She have also big understanding of humans and their emotions. She could easy eliminate all mc enemies in first chapter but she have her owns plans (restore energy). So she manipulate mc to give her what he wants. Using lust and revenge. When mc don't know what to do she give advice that will work for her favor. When she need other people to take actions she make them move. Like using Miku desire to revenge to take actions on her behalf. She don't care about Azusa suffering if that will be useful to her. The same is with mc. Mc is also tool for her to restore energy nothing more. Their contract is about geting revenge but mc didn't take any restrictions in contract on that so Asmodeus can do what she wants until mc get revenge. And if she bring mc down with it that will not be much a problem for her or she would enjoy it. Don't forgot she's a demon and you never end good with pact with demons.
 
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Chapter 56 - It's Too Late

The chapter opens with the aftermath of the events from the past two or three chapters.

The first page shows Mitsuru sitting in the back of a patrol car, arms crossed and clearly pissed, with a police officer beside him. He’s not in handcuffs. Meanwhile, Asuka and Imai are unconscious, lying on ambulance stretchers.

On the second page, the MC is seen giving a statement to a police officer, while Asmodeus floats upside down above the scene. Sawada-sensei appears at a bar, having a drink, and Akagi and Azusa are shown getting out of the taxi.

Akagi and Azusa arrive at a rundown apartment complex and make their way into one of the units.

Akagi: "Come in, come in... Don’t worry, I... live alone..."

As they step inside, Azusa thinks to herself, “A boy’s apartment? Well, whatever… It’s already late.”

Akagi: "Sit wherever y—... No... Sorry, that’s right, you need to get dressed firs—... Ah... Right! You need to shower, wait a minute!"
Akagi: "Ahh... A towel, towel..."
Akagi: "Here... The bathroom is right inside the entrance, and you can lock it without any problem."
Azusa: "Why?"
Akagi: "Hmm?"
Azusa: "Why... me..?"
Akagi: "Ah... The truth is, I happened to overhear Takeshige-kun talking to someone. I couldn’t just stand by knowing that a classmate was going through such a difficult situation."

After hearing that, Azusa thinks, "Even though we’ve never really talked? Akagi-kun... doesn’t seem like the kind of person who gets involved in this kind of stuff."

With a weird smile, Akagi says, "And... when I asked Sensei what to do, she said that calling the police wouldn’t be good for Hayami-chan. So Sensei and I decided to intervene directly... Ah, Sensei, believe it or not, has a black belt in aikido."

Azusa thinks, "That makes everything even strange... It’s hard for me to believe that a teacher would make a decision that puts a student in danger..."

Still smiling strangely, Akagi says, "Anyway, go take a shower."

Akagi: "And put on... some clothes... IT’S JUST THAT... I DON’T KNOW WHERE TO LOOK..."
Azusa: "Hmm..."

Azusa is still naked, covered only by a blanket.

In the shower, Azusa thinks, "My mind and heart can’t keep up with the changes in the situation... I don’t have the strength to think. Is it... all over now? Really?"

Azusa then remembers the kiss she saw between the MC and Asuka. She places both hands on a mirror and, starting to cry, says, "BUT... IT'S ALREADY TOO LATE. UGH... UGH..."

Back at the crime scene, Asmodeus approaches the MC and the police officer to whom the MC is giving his statement.

Asmodeus: "Thank you for your work. I am Souichi’s guardian."
Police officer: "I’m sorry for calling you so late at night... Mother."

After saying this, the MC thinks, "Is it even possible... that the police officer thinks she’s my mother?"

Police officer: "From what I’ve heard... your son is more of a well-meaning third party... We’ll ask for more details later, but for now, you’re free to go home."

MC: "Um... About Asuka. The girl who was kicked in the face... Do you know which hospital she was taken to? I’d like to go with her."
Police officer: "Her family has already been contacted... Since the injuries are minor... it's likely the patient will go home after a check-up, so I don't think it’s necessary..."
MC: Ah... I see.
Asmodeus: "Alright then, we’ll be going."

After that, the MC confronts Asmodeus.

MC: "Hey, what happened? What the hell just happened?"
Asmodeus: "That’s what I want to know too."
MC: "What?"

Worried, Asmodeus thinks, "Yeah... There was no way Azusa-chan wouldn't be there. That's how I had planned it." Then she tries to talk it out.

Asmodeus: "Azusa-chan should have been there, and after taking a few more steps... You should have been able to make both Azusa-chan and Asuka-chan yours."
MC: "DON’T TALK NONSENSE! I’M JUST TRYING TO SAVE AZUSA... AND ASUKA TOO... I WAS GOING TO BREAK UP WITH HER AFTER DEALING WITH TAKESHIGE!"
Asmodeus: "If you didn’t intervene, Azusa-chan would be harmed physically and mentally until she collapsed... And if you break up with Asuka-chan, wouldn’t you be leaving her alone to deal with all the collateral damage?"
MC: "...You can’t know that."
Asmodeus: "Of course I know. I’m a demon."
Asmodeus: "Didn't I tell you? "I won't do anything bad to you." I'm your partner. What's best for you is best for me. If I had to choose... I’d choose the path I suggested to you."

Starting to get angry, Asmodeus says, "HOWEVER... SOMETHING HAPPENED THAT SHOULDN’T HAVE HAPPENED."

With a furious face, Asmodeus shouts, "IT’S POSSIBLE THAT... ANOTHER DEMON IS INVOLVED BESIDES ME."



Insight:

Ha! Called it in the previous chapter! I knew another demon was involved, and if I were a betting man, I’d say Akagi is the demon. The way he smiles and acts reminds me of Asmodeus.

Unrelated:

My computer’s video card broke, and man, it was a pain doing this on my old Linux notebook… I really miss my PC. The new card won’t get here until the 21st… :angery:
 
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Chapter 56 - It's Too Late

The chapter opens with the aftermath of the events from the past two or three chapters.

The first page shows Mitsuru sitting in the back of a patrol car, arms crossed and clearly pissed, with a police officer beside him. He’s not in handcuffs. Meanwhile, Asuka and Imai are unconscious, lying on ambulance stretchers.

On the second page, the MC is seen giving a statement to a police officer, while Asmodeus floats upside down above the scene. Sawada-sensei appears at a bar, having a drink, and Akagi and Azusa are shown getting out of the taxi.

Akagi and Azusa arrive at a rundown apartment complex and make their way into one of the units.

Akagi: "Come in, come in... Don’t worry, I... live alone..."

As they step inside, Azusa thinks to herself, “A boy’s apartment? Well, whatever… It’s already late.”

Akagi: "Sit wherever y—... No... Sorry, that’s right, you need to get dressed firs—... Ah... Right! You need to shower, wait a minute!"
Akagi: "Ahh... A towel, towel..."
Akagi: "Here... The bathroom is right inside the entrance, and you can lock it without any problem."
Azusa: "Why?"
Akagi: "Hmm?"
Azusa: "Why... me..?"
Akagi: "Ah... The truth is, I happened to overhear Takeshige-kun talking to someone. I couldn’t just stand by knowing that a classmate was going through such a difficult situation."

After hearing that, Azusa thinks, "Even though we’ve never really talked? Akagi-kun... doesn’t seem like the kind of person who gets involved in this kind of stuff."

With a weird smile, Akagi says, "And... when I asked Sensei what to do, she said that calling the police wouldn’t be good for Hayami-chan. So Sensei and I decided to intervene directly... Ah, Sensei, believe it or not, has a black belt in aikido."

Azusa thinks, "That makes everything even strange... It’s hard for me to believe that a teacher would make a decision that puts a student in danger..."

Still smiling strangely, Akagi says, "Anyway, go take a shower."

Akagi: "And put on... some clothes... IT’S JUST THAT... I DON’T KNOW WHERE TO LOOK..."
Azusa: "Hmm..."

Azusa is still naked, covered only by a blanket.

In the shower, Azusa thinks, "My mind and heart can’t keep up with the changes in the situation... I don’t have the strength to think. Is it... all over now? Really?"

Azusa then remembers the kiss she saw between the MC and Asuka. She places both hands on a mirror and, starting to cry, says, "BUT... IT'S ALREADY TOO LATE. UGH... UGH..."

Back at the crime scene, Asmodeus approaches the MC and the police officer to whom the MC is giving his statement.

Asmodeus: "Thank you for your work. I am Souichi’s guardian."
Police officer: "I’m sorry for calling you so late at night... Mother."

After saying this, the MC thinks, "Is it even possible... that the police officer thinks she’s my mother?"

Police officer: "From what I’ve heard... your son is more of a well-meaning third party... We’ll ask for more details later, but for now, you’re free to go home."

MC: "Um... About Asuka. The girl who was kicked in the face... Do you know which hospital she was taken to? I’d like to go with her."
Police officer: "Her family has already been contacted... Since the injuries are minor... it's likely the patient will go home after a check-up, so I don't think it’s necessary..."
MC: Ah... I see.
Asmodeus: "Alright then, we’ll be going."

After that, the MC confronts Asmodeus.

MC: "Hey, what happened? What the hell just happened?"
Asmodeus: "That’s what I want to know too."
MC: "What?"

Worried, Asmodeus thinks, "Yeah... There was no way Azusa-chan wouldn't be there. That's how I had planned it." Then she tries to talk it out.

Asmodeus: "Azusa-chan should have been there, and after taking a few more steps... You should have been able to make both Azusa-chan and Asuka-chan yours."
MC: "DON’T TALK NONSENSE! I’M JUST TRYING TO SAVE AZUSA... AND ASUKA TOO... I WAS GOING TO BREAK UP WITH HER AFTER DEALING WITH TAKESHIGE!"
Asmodeus: "If you didn’t intervene, Azusa-chan would be harmed physically and mentally until she collapsed... And if you break up with Asuka-chan, wouldn’t you be leaving her alone to deal with all the collateral damage?"
MC: "...You can’t know that."
Asmodeus: "Of course I know. I’m a demon."
Asmodeus: "Didn't I tell you? "I won't do anything bad to you." I'm your partner. What's best for you is best for me. If I had to choose... I’d choose the path I suggested to you."

Starting to get angry, Asmodeus says, "HOWEVER... SOMETHING HAPPENED THAT SHOULDN’T HAVE HAPPENED."

With a furious face, Asmodeus shouts, "IT’S POSSIBLE THAT... ANOTHER DEMON IS INVOLVED BESIDES ME."



Insight:

Ha! Called it in the previous chapter! I knew another demon was involved, and if I were a betting man, I’d say Akagi is the demon. The way he smiles and acts reminds me of Asmodeus.

Unrelated:

My computer’s video card broke, and man, it was a pain doing this on my old Linux notebook… I really miss my PC. The new card won’t get here until the 21st… :angery:
Hmm, well going by Asmodeus's name, I will guess that the other demon is also named after one of the princes of Hell;

Asmodeus: One of the seven princes of Hell, known for his power and deceit.

Mammon: He is the demon of greed and avarice.

Beelzebub: One of the seven princes of Hell, also known as the Lord of Flies.

Belphegor: One of the seven princes of Hell. Also known as Beelphegor.

Leviathan: One of the seven Princes of Hell, representing envy.

Envy: One of the seven deadly sins, which is described in Dante's Divine Comedy.

Sloth: One of the 7 Deadly Sins. Embodies a state of spiritual and physical laziness

My bet is on Mammon, the demon of greed, since it fits as a malevolent rival to Asmodeus's lust.
 
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Hmm, well going by Asmodeus's name, I will guess that the other demon is also named after one of the princes of Hell;

Asmodeus: One of the seven princes of Hell, known for his power and deceit.

Mammon: He is the demon of greed and avarice.

Beelzebub: One of the seven princes of Hell, also known as the Lord of Flies.

Belphegor: One of the seven princes of Hell. Also known as Beelphegor.

Leviathan: One of the seven Princes of Hell, representing envy.

Envy: One of the seven deadly sins, which is described in Dante's Divine Comedy.

Sloth: One of the 7 Deadly Sins. Embodies a state of spiritual and physical laziness

My bet is on Mammon, the demon of greed, since it fits as a malevolent rival to Asmodeus's lust.
I remember reading somewhere that Astaroth is a demon associated with Asmodeus. I can't recall exactly where, but I asked Deepseek and this is what it gave me:

1. Origins & Mythology

  • Astaroth
    • Derived from the Canaanite goddess Astarte (associated with fertility, war, and sexuality).
    • In Christian demonology, Astaroth became a male demon—a grand duke of Hell, often depicted as a crowned figure riding a dragon.
    • Known for deceit, seduction, and knowledge (sometimes a "teacher of sciences").
  • Asmodeus
    • Originates from Persian/Zoroastrian mythology (Aeshma Daeva, a demon of wrath).
    • In Judeo-Christian texts (e.g., Book of Tobit), he’s a demon of lust, jealousy, and revenge.
    • Often portrayed as a king of demons who targets marriages and corrupts desire.

2. Connections Between Them

  • Both are high-ranking demons (often listed among the "Princes of Hell" in texts like the Ars Goetia).
  • Associated with temptation:
    • Astaroth = intellectual/social corruption.
    • Asmodeus = emotional/sexual corruption.
  • Modern media (games, anime, occult fiction) sometimes pairs them as allies/rivals (e.g., Shin Megami Tensei, Demonology lore).

3. Key Differences

DemonDomainAppearanceSymbolism
AstarothKnowledge, deceitCrowned, dragon-ridingPride, false wisdom
AsmodeusLust, revengeOften monstrous/handsomeObsession, jealousy

 
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I remember reading somewhere that Astaroth is a demon associated with Asmodeus. I can't recall exactly where, but I asked Deepseek and this is what it gave me:

1. Origins & Mythology

  • Astaroth
    • Derived from the Canaanite goddess Astarte (associated with fertility, war, and sexuality).
    • In Christian demonology, Astaroth became a male demon—a grand duke of Hell, often depicted as a crowned figure riding a dragon.
    • Known for deceit, seduction, and knowledge (sometimes a "teacher of sciences").
  • Asmodeus
    • Originates from Persian/Zoroastrian mythology (Aeshma Daeva, a demon of wrath).
    • In Judeo-Christian texts (e.g., Book of Tobit), he’s a demon of lust, jealousy, and revenge.
    • Often portrayed as a king of demons who targets marriages and corrupts desire.

2. Connections Between Them

  • Both are high-ranking demons (often listed among the "Princes of Hell" in texts like the Ars Goetia).
  • Associated with temptation:
    • Astaroth = intellectual/social corruption.
    • Asmodeus = emotional/sexual corruption.
  • Modern media (games, anime, occult fiction) sometimes pairs them as allies/rivals (e.g., Shin Megami Tensei, Demonology lore).

3. Key Differences

DemonDomainAppearanceSymbolism
AstarothKnowledge, deceitCrowned, dragon-ridingPride, false wisdom
AsmodeusLust, revengeOften monstrous/handsomeObsession, jealousy

Yeah good call with that one too, that could also be it, fits as a foil to Asmodeus.
 
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I remember reading somewhere that Astaroth is a demon associated with Asmodeus. I can't recall exactly where, but I asked Deepseek and this is what it gave me:

1. Origins & Mythology

  • Astaroth
    • Derived from the Canaanite goddess Astarte (associated with fertility, war, and sexuality).
    • In Christian demonology, Astaroth became a male demon—a grand duke of Hell, often depicted as a crowned figure riding a dragon.
    • Known for deceit, seduction, and knowledge (sometimes a "teacher of sciences").
  • Asmodeus
    • Originates from Persian/Zoroastrian mythology (Aeshma Daeva, a demon of wrath).
    • In Judeo-Christian texts (e.g., Book of Tobit), he’s a demon of lust, jealousy, and revenge.
    • Often portrayed as a king of demons who targets marriages and corrupts desire.

2. Connections Between Them

  • Both are high-ranking demons (often listed among the "Princes of Hell" in texts like the Ars Goetia).
  • Associated with temptation:
    • Astaroth = intellectual/social corruption.
    • Asmodeus = emotional/sexual corruption.
  • Modern media (games, anime, occult fiction) sometimes pairs them as allies/rivals (e.g., Shin Megami Tensei, Demonology lore).

3. Key Differences

DemonDomainAppearanceSymbolism
AstarothKnowledge, deceitCrowned, dragon-ridingPride, false wisdom
AsmodeusLust, revengeOften monstrous/handsomeObsession, jealousy

this demon can fit the bill with how thing happen rn
 
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Chapter 56 - It's Too Late

The chapter opens with the aftermath of the events from the past two or three chapters.

The first page shows Mitsuru sitting in the back of a patrol car, arms crossed and clearly pissed, with a police officer beside him. He’s not in handcuffs. Meanwhile, Asuka and Imai are unconscious, lying on ambulance stretchers.

On the second page, the MC is seen giving a statement to a police officer, while Asmodeus floats upside down above the scene. Sawada-sensei appears at a bar, having a drink, and Akagi and Azusa are shown getting out of the taxi.

Akagi and Azusa arrive at a rundown apartment complex and make their way into one of the units.

Akagi: "Come in, come in... Don’t worry, I... live alone..."

As they step inside, Azusa thinks to herself, “A boy’s apartment? Well, whatever… It’s already late.”

Akagi: "Sit wherever y—... No... Sorry, that’s right, you need to get dressed firs—... Ah... Right! You need to shower, wait a minute!"
Akagi: "Ahh... A towel, towel..."
Akagi: "Here... The bathroom is right inside the entrance, and you can lock it without any problem."
Azusa: "Why?"
Akagi: "Hmm?"
Azusa: "Why... me..?"
Akagi: "Ah... The truth is, I happened to overhear Takeshige-kun talking to someone. I couldn’t just stand by knowing that a classmate was going through such a difficult situation."

After hearing that, Azusa thinks, "Even though we’ve never really talked? Akagi-kun... doesn’t seem like the kind of person who gets involved in this kind of stuff."

With a weird smile, Akagi says, "And... when I asked Sensei what to do, she said that calling the police wouldn’t be good for Hayami-chan. So Sensei and I decided to intervene directly... Ah, Sensei, believe it or not, has a black belt in aikido."

Azusa thinks, "That makes everything even strange... It’s hard for me to believe that a teacher would make a decision that puts a student in danger..."

Still smiling strangely, Akagi says, "Anyway, go take a shower."

Akagi: "And put on... some clothes... IT’S JUST THAT... I DON’T KNOW WHERE TO LOOK..."
Azusa: "Hmm..."

Azusa is still naked, covered only by a blanket.

In the shower, Azusa thinks, "My mind and heart can’t keep up with the changes in the situation... I don’t have the strength to think. Is it... all over now? Really?"

Azusa then remembers the kiss she saw between the MC and Asuka. She places both hands on a mirror and, starting to cry, says, "BUT... IT'S ALREADY TOO LATE. UGH... UGH..."

Back at the crime scene, Asmodeus approaches the MC and the police officer to whom the MC is giving his statement.

Asmodeus: "Thank you for your work. I am Souichi’s guardian."
Police officer: "I’m sorry for calling you so late at night... Mother."

After saying this, the MC thinks, "Is it even possible... that the police officer thinks she’s my mother?"

Police officer: "From what I’ve heard... your son is more of a well-meaning third party... We’ll ask for more details later, but for now, you’re free to go home."

MC: "Um... About Asuka. The girl who was kicked in the face... Do you know which hospital she was taken to? I’d like to go with her."
Police officer: "Her family has already been contacted... Since the injuries are minor... it's likely the patient will go home after a check-up, so I don't think it’s necessary..."
MC: Ah... I see.
Asmodeus: "Alright then, we’ll be going."

After that, the MC confronts Asmodeus.

MC: "Hey, what happened? What the hell just happened?"
Asmodeus: "That’s what I want to know too."
MC: "What?"

Worried, Asmodeus thinks, "Yeah... There was no way Azusa-chan wouldn't be there. That's how I had planned it." Then she tries to talk it out.

Asmodeus: "Azusa-chan should have been there, and after taking a few more steps... You should have been able to make both Azusa-chan and Asuka-chan yours."
MC: "DON’T TALK NONSENSE! I’M JUST TRYING TO SAVE AZUSA... AND ASUKA TOO... I WAS GOING TO BREAK UP WITH HER AFTER DEALING WITH TAKESHIGE!"
Asmodeus: "If you didn’t intervene, Azusa-chan would be harmed physically and mentally until she collapsed... And if you break up with Asuka-chan, wouldn’t you be leaving her alone to deal with all the collateral damage?"
MC: "...You can’t know that."
Asmodeus: "Of course I know. I’m a demon."
Asmodeus: "Didn't I tell you? "I won't do anything bad to you." I'm your partner. What's best for you is best for me. If I had to choose... I’d choose the path I suggested to you."

Starting to get angry, Asmodeus says, "HOWEVER... SOMETHING HAPPENED THAT SHOULDN’T HAVE HAPPENED."

With a furious face, Asmodeus shouts, "IT’S POSSIBLE THAT... ANOTHER DEMON IS INVOLVED BESIDES ME."



Insight:

Ha! Called it in the previous chapter! I knew another demon was involved, and if I were a betting man, I’d say Akagi is the demon. The way he smiles and acts reminds me of Asmodeus.

Unrelated:

My computer’s video card broke, and man, it was a pain doing this on my old Linux notebook… I really miss my PC. The new card won’t get here until the 21st… :angery:
Thanks as always for the TL.
Man this is beyond the pale with Azusa. This girl is not getting ANY peace. If only MC actually had the balls to reach out to her propery. Yet somehow he has the balls to conduct all these hairbrained schemes.
I wonder if Akagi is working with Mitsuru or not. He may not have a contract after all this. In that case, maybe Azusa could form a pact for her own revenge.
 
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Thanks as always for the TL.
Man this is beyond the pale with Azusa. This girl is not getting ANY peace. If only MC actually had the balls to reach out to her propery. Yet somehow he has the balls to conduct all these hairbrained schemes.
I wonder if Akagi is working with Mitsuru or not. He may not have a contract after all this. In that case, maybe Azusa could form a pact for her own revenge.
Mc try to reach her but she stay in her home (still send her messages). He probably want give her space as she blame him for what happend. MC belive all this time she stain in her room. And Asmodeus make sure he didn't think she may be "abused" (block his thinking in ch. 51). So mc follow Asmoudeus plan for his revenge.
 
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Chapter 56 - It's Too Late

The chapter opens with the aftermath of the events from the past two or three chapters.

The first page shows Mitsuru sitting in the back of a patrol car, arms crossed and clearly pissed, with a police officer beside him. He’s not in handcuffs. Meanwhile, Asuka and Imai are unconscious, lying on ambulance stretchers.

On the second page, the MC is seen giving a statement to a police officer, while Asmodeus floats upside down above the scene. Sawada-sensei appears at a bar, having a drink, and Akagi and Azusa are shown getting out of the taxi.

Akagi and Azusa arrive at a rundown apartment complex and make their way into one of the units.

Akagi: "Come in, come in... Don’t worry, I... live alone..."

As they step inside, Azusa thinks to herself, “A boy’s apartment? Well, whatever… It’s already late.”

Akagi: "Sit wherever y—... No... Sorry, that’s right, you need to get dressed firs—... Ah... Right! You need to shower, wait a minute!"
Akagi: "Ahh... A towel, towel..."
Akagi: "Here... The bathroom is right inside the entrance, and you can lock it without any problem."
Azusa: "Why?"
Akagi: "Hmm?"
Azusa: "Why... me..?"
Akagi: "Ah... The truth is, I happened to overhear Takeshige-kun talking to someone. I couldn’t just stand by knowing that a classmate was going through such a difficult situation."

After hearing that, Azusa thinks, "Even though we’ve never really talked? Akagi-kun... doesn’t seem like the kind of person who gets involved in this kind of stuff."

With a weird smile, Akagi says, "And... when I asked Sensei what to do, she said that calling the police wouldn’t be good for Hayami-chan. So Sensei and I decided to intervene directly... Ah, Sensei, believe it or not, has a black belt in aikido."

Azusa thinks, "That makes everything even strange... It’s hard for me to believe that a teacher would make a decision that puts a student in danger..."

Still smiling strangely, Akagi says, "Anyway, go take a shower."

Akagi: "And put on... some clothes... IT’S JUST THAT... I DON’T KNOW WHERE TO LOOK..."
Azusa: "Hmm..."

Azusa is still naked, covered only by a blanket.

In the shower, Azusa thinks, "My mind and heart can’t keep up with the changes in the situation... I don’t have the strength to think. Is it... all over now? Really?"

Azusa then remembers the kiss she saw between the MC and Asuka. She places both hands on a mirror and, starting to cry, says, "BUT... IT'S ALREADY TOO LATE. UGH... UGH..."

Back at the crime scene, Asmodeus approaches the MC and the police officer to whom the MC is giving his statement.

Asmodeus: "Thank you for your work. I am Souichi’s guardian."
Police officer: "I’m sorry for calling you so late at night... Mother."

After saying this, the MC thinks, "Is it even possible... that the police officer thinks she’s my mother?"

Police officer: "From what I’ve heard... your son is more of a well-meaning third party... We’ll ask for more details later, but for now, you’re free to go home."

MC: "Um... About Asuka. The girl who was kicked in the face... Do you know which hospital she was taken to? I’d like to go with her."
Police officer: "Her family has already been contacted... Since the injuries are minor... it's likely the patient will go home after a check-up, so I don't think it’s necessary..."
MC: Ah... I see.
Asmodeus: "Alright then, we’ll be going."

After that, the MC confronts Asmodeus.

MC: "Hey, what happened? What the hell just happened?"
Asmodeus: "That’s what I want to know too."
MC: "What?"

Worried, Asmodeus thinks, "Yeah... There was no way Azusa-chan wouldn't be there. That's how I had planned it." Then she tries to talk it out.

Asmodeus: "Azusa-chan should have been there, and after taking a few more steps... You should have been able to make both Azusa-chan and Asuka-chan yours."
MC: "DON’T TALK NONSENSE! I’M JUST TRYING TO SAVE AZUSA... AND ASUKA TOO... I WAS GOING TO BREAK UP WITH HER AFTER DEALING WITH TAKESHIGE!"
Asmodeus: "If you didn’t intervene, Azusa-chan would be harmed physically and mentally until she collapsed... And if you break up with Asuka-chan, wouldn’t you be leaving her alone to deal with all the collateral damage?"
MC: "...You can’t know that."
Asmodeus: "Of course I know. I’m a demon."
Asmodeus: "Didn't I tell you? "I won't do anything bad to you." I'm your partner. What's best for you is best for me. If I had to choose... I’d choose the path I suggested to you."

Starting to get angry, Asmodeus says, "HOWEVER... SOMETHING HAPPENED THAT SHOULDN’T HAVE HAPPENED."

With a furious face, Asmodeus shouts, "IT’S POSSIBLE THAT... ANOTHER DEMON IS INVOLVED BESIDES ME."



Insight:

Ha! Called it in the previous chapter! I knew another demon was involved, and if I were a betting man, I’d say Akagi is the demon. The way he smiles and acts reminds me of Asmodeus.

Unrelated:

My computer’s video card broke, and man, it was a pain doing this on my old Linux notebook… I really miss my PC. The new card won’t get here until the 21st… :angery:
They're gonna put Azusa super close to the edge before rescuing her, huh.
 
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Chapter 57 - Modified Memories

The chapter begins with a flashback showing what happened to Imai.

The first page and half of the second show Imai walking down the street in her school uniform when she’s suddenly kidnapped by two men in a van. Their faces are hidden behind emotes.

In the middle of the second page, there’s an effect of black lines—it's unclear whether this indicates a time jump or if something is being deliberately left out.

The second half of the second page shows her being raped by the two men, their dicks hidden behind emotes.

Imai: "A-AAAH-AH! W-WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME!? AAAH!"

The third page shows her being raped by Akagi, his face hidden behind an emote. At the bottom of the page, black lines appear again.

Imai: "UGH... I WON’T FORGIVE YOU! FOR THIS...."

???? (Akagi): "Soon you won’t be able to talk like that anymore."

The fourth page shows her being raped by Akagi again, but she no longer resists. His dick is hidden behind an emote. At the end of the page, black lines appear once more.

Imai: "AA-AAH! IT FEELS GOOD! AAA-AAH! MORE... GIVE ME MORE..."

The fifth page shows Imai walking behind Akagi and Sawada-sensei, their faces hidden. Sawada-sensei talks to Imai, her face hidden by an emote.

???? (Sawada-sensei): "By doing this, you’ll be helping censored-sama... Aren’t you glad?"
Imai: "Yes... I’m glad."

The first half of the sixth page shows Imai, Akagi, and Sawada-sensei from behind, standing in front of the entrance to the Inoue building. Sawada-sensei has her arm around Imai’s shoulders. Halfway down the page, black lines appear again.

The second half of the sixth page shows Asmodeus sitting on top of an unconscious Imai in a hospital bed. Asmodeus has her index finger inside Imai’s head. What we’re seeing is Asmodeus accessing Imai’s memories.

Page seven: Asmodeus still sitting on top of Imai in the hospital bed.

Asmodeus: "They have manipulated your memory."

Asmodeus thinks, "There’s no way to restore it... So you’re “Disposable.” If this is a disposable sacrifice, it's very likely that Long Hair is also being used."

Asmodeus: "Anyway... Increasing sexual sensitivity and desire in such a crude way... It makes no sense. Who could it be?"

Page eight: Asmodeus is still sitting on top of Imai in the hospital bed.

Asmodeus: "Whoever it is... It’s not a deadly sin. Those guys don’t need such petty tricks. A succubus or a rebellious demon? Well... If it gets in my way, I’ll crush it without hesitation."

Page nine: Asmodeus is still sitting on top of Imai in the hospital bed.

Asmodeus thinks, "Still, this girl... really hates Asuka-chan."

Asmodeus smiles.

Asmodeus thinks, "Ah... I see... Interesting. Should I manipulate her a little too...?"

Page ten: A change of scene. At Azusa’s house, her mother stands at the door of Azusa’s room.

Azusa's mother: "Souichi-kun has come to see you... Azusa..."

Page eleven: Azusa responds, and her mother returns to the entrance of the house where the MC is waiting.

Azusa: "... I don’t want to see him. Tell him to leave."
Azusa's mother: "But... Azusa..."

The MC thinks as he overhears the conversation at the entrance of the house, “At least I know she’s home... Does that mean she wasn’t at the Inoue building last night...?”

Azusa's mother: "I’m sorry... Souichi-kun. It seems Azusa doesn’t want to come out of her room..."

Page twelve: The MC says goodbye to Azusa’s mother and heads home.

MC: "No... Sorry for coming so suddenly. If there’s anything I can help with, please let me know."
Azusa's mother: "Thank you."
MC: "Alright then... See you soon."

In the first half of page thirteen, we see the MC entering his house. In the second half, the scene shifts to the police station, where Mitsuru is being held. The useless detectives make their return.

MC: "Azusa..."

MC thinks, "It hasn’t spread much yet, but... Once it’s known that they’ve arrested Takeshige, I’m sure she’ll be able to get out..."

Page fourteen: The detectives talk.

Older detective: "Wow... It’s been such a hectic day from the very start. Seriously."
Younger detective: "Ha-ha-ha. Well, at least they didn’t call you in the middle of the night, so it’s not that bad. That Sakuraba-kun... Seems like he was at the scene."
Older detective: "It’s not relevant. We just have to catch the one who needs to be caught. That’s all."

Page fifteen: The detectives enter the room where Mitsuru awaits interrogation.

Younger detective: "Yes, yes."
Older detective: "Alright, Takeshige-kun... Shall we start the interrogation?"

Page sixteen: The younger detective talks to Mitsuru.

Younger detective: "Hey, Takeshige-kun... Don’t think this is going to be like the interrogation at school. It seems you’ve decided to stay silent... But that will only prolong your detention."
Younger detective: "You are currently guilty of the crimes of assault and non-consensual sexual relations."


Insight:

Not much to say about this chapter. We had speculated that the other demon might be one of the deadly sins, but Asmodeus doesn’t seem to think so. Also, since Akagi also raped Imai, I doubt he’s the demon—Akagi's probably Toshi-sama.

Sorry for the confusion in the description of events—the chapter is quite convoluted, with scene changes happening in the middle of pages.
 
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Chapter 57 - Modified Memories

The chapter begins with a flashback showing what happened to Imai.

The first page and half of the second show Imai walking down the street in her school uniform when she’s suddenly kidnapped by two men in a van. Their faces are hidden behind emotes.

In the middle of the second page, there’s an effect of black lines—it's unclear whether this indicates a time jump or if something is being deliberately left out.

The second half of the second page shows her being raped by the two men, their dicks hidden behind emotes.

Imai: "A-AAAH-AH! W-WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME!? AAAH!"

The third page shows her being raped by Akagi, his face hidden behind an emote. At the bottom of the page, black lines appear again.

Imai: "UGH... I WON’T FORGIVE YOU! FOR THIS...."

???? (Akagi): "Soon you won’t be able to talk like that anymore."

The fourth page shows her being raped by Akagi again, but she no longer resists. His dick is hidden behind an emote. At the end of the page, black lines appear once more.

Imai: "AA-AAH! IT FEELS GOOD! AAA-AAH! MORE... GIVE ME MORE..."

The fifth page shows Imai walking behind Akagi and Sawada-sensei, their faces hidden. Sawada-sensei talks to Imai, her face hidden by an emote.

???? (Sawada-sensei): "By doing this, you’ll be helping censored-sama... Aren’t you glad?"
Imai: "Yes... I’m glad."

The first half of the sixth page shows Imai, Akagi, and Sawada-sensei from behind, standing in front of the entrance to the Inoue building. Sawada-sensei has her arm around Imai’s shoulders. Halfway down the page, black lines appear again.

The second half of the sixth page shows Asmodeus sitting on top of an unconscious Imai in a hospital bed. Asmodeus has her index finger inside Imai’s head. What we’re seeing is Asmodeus accessing Imai’s memories.

Page seven: Asmodeus still sitting on top of Imai in the hospital bed.

Asmodeus: "They have manipulated your memory."

Asmodeus thinks, "There’s no way to restore it... So you’re “Disposable.” If this is a disposable sacrifice, it's very likely that Long Hair is also being used."

Asmodeus: "Anyway... Increasing sexual sensitivity and desire in such a crude way... It makes no sense. Who could it be?"

Page eight: Asmodeus is still sitting on top of Imai in the hospital bed.

Asmodeus: "Whoever it is... It’s not a deadly sin. Those guys don’t need such petty tricks. A succubus or a rebellious demon? Well... If it gets in my way, I’ll crush it without hesitation."

Page nine: Asmodeus is still sitting on top of Imai in the hospital bed.

Asmodeus thinks, "Still, this girl... really hates Asuka-chan."

Asmodeus smiles.

Asmodeus thinks, "Ah... I see... Interesting. Should I manipulate her a little too...?"

Page ten: A change of scene. At Azusa’s house, her mother stands at the door of Azusa’s room.

Azusa's mother: "Souichi-kun has come to see you... Azusa..."

Page eleven: Azusa responds, and her mother returns to the entrance of the house where the MC is waiting.

Azusa: "... I don’t want to see him. Tell him to leave."
Azusa's mother: "But... Azusa..."

The MC thinks as he overhears the conversation at the entrance of the house, “At least I know she’s home... Does that mean she wasn’t at the Inoue building last night...?”

Azusa's mother: "I’m sorry... Souichi-kun. It seems Azusa doesn’t want to come out of her room..."

Page twelve: The MC says goodbye to Azusa’s mother and heads home.

MC: "No... Sorry for coming so suddenly. If there’s anything I can help with, please let me know."
Azusa's mother: "Thank you."
MC: "Alright then... See you soon."

In the first half of page thirteen, we see the MC entering his house. In the second half, the scene shifts to the police station, where Mitsuru is being held. The useless detectives make their return.

MC: "Azusa..."

MC thinks, "It hasn’t spread much yet, but... Once it’s known that they’ve arrested Takeshige, I’m sure she’ll be able to get out..."

Page fourteen: The detectives talk.

Older detective: "Wow... It’s been such a hectic day from the very start. Seriously."
Younger detective: "Ha-ha-ha. Well, at least they didn’t call you in the middle of the night, so it’s not that bad. That Sakuraba-kun... Seems like he was at the scene."
Older detective: "It’s not relevant. We just have to catch the one who needs to be caught. That’s all."

Page fifteen: The detectives enter the room where Mitsuru awaits interrogation.

Younger detective: "Yes, yes."
Older detective: "Alright, Takeshige-kun... Shall we start the interrogation?"

Page sixteen: The younger detective talks to Mitsuru.

Younger detective: "Hey, Takeshige-kun... Don’t think this is going to be like the interrogation at school. It seems you’ve decided to stay silent... But that will only prolong your detention."
Younger detective: "You are currently guilty of the crimes of assault and non-consensual sexual relations."


Insight:

Not much to say about this chapter. We had speculated that the other demon might be one of the deadly sins, but Asmodeus doesn’t seem to think so. Also, since Akagi also raped Imai, I doubt he’s the demon—Akagi's probably Toshi-sama.

Sorry for the confusion in the description of events—the chapter is quite convoluted, with scene changes happening in the middle of pages.
The spanish TL's comments on the website is always so funny to me:

"Bueno, aquí está el capítulo 57 de NTRevenge
Pasado de la chica, rastros del demonio, Azusa "A salvo" y Takeshige sabiendo que lo liberarán a la semana.
¿A dónde llevará todo esto? Quien sabe, ya se vio que el autor está inventando todo conforme avanza.
Gracias por leer y esperen el siguiente capitulo…"

"Well, here's chapter 57 of NTRevenge.
The girl's past, traces of the demon, Azusa "safe," and Takeshige knowing he'll be released within the week.
Where will all this lead? Who knows? It's clear the author is making things up as he goes.
Thanks for reading, and look forward to the next chapter..."
 
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Chapter 57 - Modified Memories

The chapter begins with a flashback showing what happened to Imai.

The first page and half of the second show Imai walking down the street in her school uniform when she’s suddenly kidnapped by two men in a van. Their faces are hidden behind emotes.

In the middle of the second page, there’s an effect of black lines—it's unclear whether this indicates a time jump or if something is being deliberately left out.

The second half of the second page shows her being raped by the two men, their dicks hidden behind emotes.

Imai: "A-AAAH-AH! W-WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME!? AAAH!"

The third page shows her being raped by Akagi, his face hidden behind an emote. At the bottom of the page, black lines appear again.

Imai: "UGH... I WON’T FORGIVE YOU! FOR THIS...."

???? (Akagi): "Soon you won’t be able to talk like that anymore."

The fourth page shows her being raped by Akagi again, but she no longer resists. His dick is hidden behind an emote. At the end of the page, black lines appear once more.

Imai: "AA-AAH! IT FEELS GOOD! AAA-AAH! MORE... GIVE ME MORE..."

The fifth page shows Imai walking behind Akagi and Sawada-sensei, their faces hidden. Sawada-sensei talks to Imai, her face hidden by an emote.

???? (Sawada-sensei): "By doing this, you’ll be helping censored-sama... Aren’t you glad?"
Imai: "Yes... I’m glad."

The first half of the sixth page shows Imai, Akagi, and Sawada-sensei from behind, standing in front of the entrance to the Inoue building. Sawada-sensei has her arm around Imai’s shoulders. Halfway down the page, black lines appear again.

The second half of the sixth page shows Asmodeus sitting on top of an unconscious Imai in a hospital bed. Asmodeus has her index finger inside Imai’s head. What we’re seeing is Asmodeus accessing Imai’s memories.

Page seven: Asmodeus still sitting on top of Imai in the hospital bed.

Asmodeus: "They have manipulated your memory."

Asmodeus thinks, "There’s no way to restore it... So you’re “Disposable.” If this is a disposable sacrifice, it's very likely that Long Hair is also being used."

Asmodeus: "Anyway... Increasing sexual sensitivity and desire in such a crude way... It makes no sense. Who could it be?"

Page eight: Asmodeus is still sitting on top of Imai in the hospital bed.

Asmodeus: "Whoever it is... It’s not a deadly sin. Those guys don’t need such petty tricks. A succubus or a rebellious demon? Well... If it gets in my way, I’ll crush it without hesitation."

Page nine: Asmodeus is still sitting on top of Imai in the hospital bed.

Asmodeus thinks, "Still, this girl... really hates Asuka-chan."

Asmodeus smiles.

Asmodeus thinks, "Ah... I see... Interesting. Should I manipulate her a little too...?"

Page ten: A change of scene. At Azusa’s house, her mother stands at the door of Azusa’s room.

Azusa's mother: "Souichi-kun has come to see you... Azusa..."

Page eleven: Azusa responds, and her mother returns to the entrance of the house where the MC is waiting.

Azusa: "... I don’t want to see him. Tell him to leave."
Azusa's mother: "But... Azusa..."

The MC thinks as he overhears the conversation at the entrance of the house, “At least I know she’s home... Does that mean she wasn’t at the Inoue building last night...?”

Azusa's mother: "I’m sorry... Souichi-kun. It seems Azusa doesn’t want to come out of her room..."

Page twelve: The MC says goodbye to Azusa’s mother and heads home.

MC: "No... Sorry for coming so suddenly. If there’s anything I can help with, please let me know."
Azusa's mother: "Thank you."
MC: "Alright then... See you soon."

In the first half of page thirteen, we see the MC entering his house. In the second half, the scene shifts to the police station, where Mitsuru is being held. The useless detectives make their return.

MC: "Azusa..."

MC thinks, "It hasn’t spread much yet, but... Once it’s known that they’ve arrested Takeshige, I’m sure she’ll be able to get out..."

Page fourteen: The detectives talk.

Older detective: "Wow... It’s been such a hectic day from the very start. Seriously."
Younger detective: "Ha-ha-ha. Well, at least they didn’t call you in the middle of the night, so it’s not that bad. That Sakuraba-kun... Seems like he was at the scene."
Older detective: "It’s not relevant. We just have to catch the one who needs to be caught. That’s all."

Page fifteen: The detectives enter the room where Mitsuru awaits interrogation.

Younger detective: "Yes, yes."
Older detective: "Alright, Takeshige-kun... Shall we start the interrogation?"

Page sixteen: The younger detective talks to Mitsuru.

Younger detective: "Hey, Takeshige-kun... Don’t think this is going to be like the interrogation at school. It seems you’ve decided to stay silent... But that will only prolong your detention."
Younger detective: "You are currently guilty of the crimes of assault and non-consensual sexual relations."


Insight:

Not much to say about this chapter. We had speculated that the other demon might be one of the deadly sins, but Asmodeus doesn’t seem to think so. Also, since Akagi also raped Imai, I doubt he’s the demon—Akagi's probably Toshi-sama.

Sorry for the confusion in the description of events—the chapter is quite convoluted, with scene changes happening in the middle of pages.
yeah, not enough to eat in this chapter.
A bit confusing as you said, with every bit of info concerning different character going forth and back. Yup, feel like a filler info drop :lul:
 

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