Ogami Tsumiki to Kinichijou. - Vol. 1 Ch. 6 - Tsumiki Plays Baseball

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If you really STILL didn't get it; People were mad because the 3rd chapter (vampire introduction) was completely different from the first two. Add to that world- and characterbuilding just started and Tsumiki was completely overhauled and acted differently after just one chapter. Full on bait and switch for the whole manga.

Also, the "cultural differences" could've been shown in infinite other more interesting ways than introducing a (factual) NTR-bait-"love-rival"-tool that stays as part of the main cast when there was a universal, over multiple many sites all over the world, outcry as to why this sucks and makes no sense.

You can insult others and pretend like this is something else. But facts about writing/storytelling can be analyzed and put into words. Your personal feelings do not matter here. It is what it is.
Having the vampire that is established as the race of ikkemen that went through the plot device of NTR-bait is something that makes sense, here. He oozes the playboy aura in the preceding chapter, so the bait device afterwards is not something "completely different".

Having the plot device being an NTR-bait is also a clever choice to reveal the character of Yutaka, which was shown to actually willing to take action despite having a reserved personality. This is an interesting development. It also shows us the gap between humans and the genjins; it goes beyond cultural difference, I think. Werewolfs and vampires don't have the same culture, after all. The blood-sucking vignette shows the gap between humans' and genjins' conduct and how they see the world (I can't believe I explained this part like ProZD tried to justify breast-feeding anime).

The only drawback I see from that vignette is that we don't get clear confirmation on how Tsumiki and Sengan, the genjins, actually see it from their perspective. It is just brushed off, as they look cluelessly at Yutaka doing kow-tows "randomly" in front of them. Especially so with Tsumiki which seemingly was about to get under the effect of Sengan's vampiric allure perfume thing, which is never explored afterwards. That is sucks. We only see Sengan poking Yutaka "you jelly?", but we never get to see his true intention as well: food or fuckboy?
 
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I don't even give a shit about MC, the wolf girl, or Senga anymore, I'm here just for the girl writing down notes on the abhumans lol

I really hope I get to see more of that dork lol
 
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yes, enough to ruin the chapter for me. i think this will play out as a reverse harem kind of manga since wolf is author's self insert
How does he being here ruin the chapter ?

On regards to the chapter, this one made me think that being an athlete in this universe must suck ass if they allow genjin to participate alongside humans. If you are a human, you get absolutely outclassed by any genjin due to the natural advantages some of them can get in any sport of your choice so no matter how much effort you make you might never ever reach the top due to them always being better. If you are a genjin, humans might legit hate you because they might think you were born gifted just for being a genjin no matter the amount of effort you went through training for your sport of choice.

EDIT: Wow, after reading these comments, there are a lot of weirdos who dislike male characters in romance manga unless they are a self insert huh.
 
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how about you delete yourself?
Hahaha, what an original and smart reply, buddy!

You shouldn't be wasting your talents here with us mortals!

Now, on a serious note, thanks to your reply I realized it's being months I hadn't seen vampire boy and the story is MUCH better now (it's 100% fluffy).

Glad to see Author and Editor decided to just delete the character (manga would be more popular if not because of that mistake).

As I said, maybe in the future they can reintroduce him, but the first chapsters should be focused on developing the main couple, not adding unnecessary drama.

Have a nice day, and thanks for reminding me that this comment became true in the future (?
 
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Hahaha, what an original and smart reply, buddy!

You shouldn't be wasting your talents here with us mortals!

Now, on a serious note, thanks to your reply I realized it's being months I hadn't seen vampire boy and the story is MUCH better now (it's 100% fluffy).

Glad to see Author and Editor decided to just delete the character (manga would be more popular if not because of that mistake).

As I said, maybe in the future they can reintroduce him, but the first chapsters should be focused on developing the main couple, not adding unnecessary drama.

Have a nice day, and thanks for reminding me that this comment became true in the future (?
huh? what got deleted? was the manga different a few months ago? if yes then congratulations on being a textbook example of cancel culture 👏👏
 

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