... I can't figure out if Moe-chan saw Daa-san's erection poking through Kyouko's dress.
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SquigglesJP: The amount of typos and other errors in this chapter as well as the new Hakase Kimagure no Homunculus chapter give me the impression that you've rushed them out.
You wrote "Da san" (single "a" and no hyphen) instead of the usual "Daa-san" on the following pages:
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twice.
Page 7
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Page 5: "a Okusan" is grammatically wrong; you should be using "a
n" as the article.
Page 12: "I'm glad Okusan haven't had dinner yet." If it's just one person, you should be using "hasn't".
Page 13: You wrote "Okita san" without a hyphen.