This translation is definitely much better and more accurate. And the image quality is better as well, Flame Scans is weirdly upscaled.
Some translation differences, for example.
Ch. 32:
Henlo's translation
-YJH: "Right before being buried under the monsters, the thing he put inside his mouth was...!"
-KDJ: "Ah, did he realize? Well, if it weren't for this guy, I wouldn't ever have known to use this method."
Flame scan's translation
-YJH: "Just before the monsters could reach him, he swallowed those...!"
-YJH...again???: "Doesn't he recognise what are those stones? Even if he does, he will still die."
Novel translation
「 That…? 」
Yoo Jonghyuk’s eyes shook with surprise. This bastard, did he find out? Well, I wouldn’t have known this method without him.
Ch. 33:
Henlo's translation
-JHW: "Did you find Lee Hyunsung-ssi's thigh comfortable?"
Flame scan's translation
-JHW: "Lee Hyunsung-ssi, how are your thighs?"
Novel translation
Jung Heewon smiled.
“By the way, is Lee Hyunsung’s thigh comfortable?”