I can feel a lot of potential from this (even though it's just one chapter I've got a good feeling, like a lot of really good stuff I've read) but it could very easily stray off track into the same horrible low quality garbage that's so common (hopefully it doesn't turn into basically a 4-koma of him running from every situation, the main characters having one personality trait the whole series that becomes a bad running joke like LMS, or a tacked on harem for popular cliches, or yaoi lol).