Oniisan no Hikkoshi no Katazuke ga Susumanai - Vol. 2 Ch. 13 - I want to make something with Onii-chan part 2

[MangaDex]

 

[Sentauda7]

thank you for the scans

 

[DLN]

it's been forever thank you for picking this up

 

[Dosky]

It's been three years, now I understand why I wasn't remembering much. A re-read is in order.

 

[Floou]

Been a while wasn't it?

 

[kuma]

i am completely lost.

 

[anon763]

What language is this supposed to have been translated into? Because it's not English.

 

[F1shbowl]

Holy fucking bingle an update after three whole years? Ah, the memories of the ideal cousin relationship are flooding back to me now.

 

[HYBRID_BEING]

Spoiler: Ugh, quite a lot of errors, tbh.

Page 1, "You don't have to listen to what Mio said"
Page 1, "But it's for you"
Page 2, "I won't let Takaho to be humiliated" (or "I won't let allow Takaho to be humiliated")
Page 2, "He is completely naked"
Page 3, "Aren't you feeling ashamed only being only one wearing normal clothes"
Page 3, "You are joking"
Page 4 "Since there is are no aprons left"
Page 4, "That i used the other day"
Page 5, "Thisese clothes"
Page 5, "Thatose clothes" (Whether it is "those" or "these", depends on translation, i believe)
Page 5, spme text is in lower case, which is inconsistent with other speech bubbles in the chapter.
Page 6, "I over do did it"
Page 7, "Okoniomiyaki"
Page 8, "Sit and wears"
Page 8, "My heart beats like crazy"
Page 9, "By "Dali" you mean thatose ants"
Page 10, "The anteaters coame to help" (or "The anteaters comes to help", depending on tense)
Page 10, "Dali often draws drew an ants"
Page 11, "Everybody seems enthusiasmtic"
Page 11, "Said the guy who wear is wearing a naked apron with his nipples standing out"
Page 12, "But is't are they soft though?"
Page 12, "Onii-chan's nipples is are in danger"
Page 13, "It's looks nice but"
Page 14, "Most of the preparations is were done by him"
Page 14, "But the one who cooked is was Fuji-nii"
Page 14, "Getting more along along more"
Page 15, "Thiink of something i helped with"
Page 15, "I helped taking getting the bacon"
Page 15, "And i helped taking everyone's pictures"
Page 16, "I will make sure to print all our pictures"
Page 16, "I want onii-chan's picture"
Page 16, "First time At first, when Mio coame here i kinda worryied but" > "At first, when Mio came here i kinda worried but"
Page 17, "Having an onee-chan"
Page 17, "Get along from now on"
Page 18, "I'm homee"
Page 18, "What is are that those outfits..?"
Honorifics are written inconsistently - together or with spaces. Hiphen seems more natural to me: "onii-chan", "Fuji-chan", but at least stick to one or the other.
"Etto.." on page 8, "Ecchi" on page 11. I mean, i know what those words mean (and a person who knows those probably knows what "onee-chan" means as well), but they are basically untranslated.
General lack of punctuation, especially many question and exclamation marks at the end of the speech bubbles are missing.

 

[fireproofemu]

Please either work on your English or get a proofreader.

 

[Sentauda7]

hopefully someone can help the translator.

 

[Heika]

Even if the English is a bit rough, I seriously appreciate the work you did