Onna Chara de Isekai Teni shite Cheatppoi kedo Zako Chara na no de Medatazu Heiwa na Shomin wo Mezashimasu! - Ch. 4.1 - Susie returns home

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I recognize those assets in the top down dnd style map.
I used them to make maps for my players, too, on a number of occasions.

I'm willing to put big bucks on the software used to make those maps being Inkarnate. (Also thanks author for reminding me to quit my subscription, I don't need it anymore ever since my campaign is over)
 
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Was looking for a blown off mountain top on the map but didn't see any.
Came to say same, kind of lame.

No reason to have weird gender flip nonsense.
Sure there is, it's call a self-insertion fantasy, which is 99.99% of what isekais are. There's plenty of beta virgin MCs (ok there's an overwhelming surplus of beta virgin MCs), alpha MCs, evil revenge MCs, NTR MCs, etc... so of course there's the I'm-a-little-girl-now MCs.
 
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I like how the mountain keeps getting brought up, but it's not just for laughs, and they actually use the mention to explore the characters' perspectives a bit. It's some nice writing.
 
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I find it suprising to see an inkarnate map in manga its an online software for making maps likes i use if for dnd
 
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I'd maybe be able to retain (and care about) this story more if the story came out in full chapters.

FlaemesTL, I implore you to put out the full chapter instead of snippets like this, where all I can take away is "BLT" and "I blew up a mountain", even if it's gotta be every 2-3 months now.
 
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The maps are a nice little bit of world building that I can appreciate.
 
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Just like every single gender swap manga… there is literally no reason for it 99.9% of the time. The first two or three chapters will have a few jokes about it, then it will never be addressed ever again.

99% of the time it would’ve just been better to have a woman at the start. No reason to have weird gender flip nonsense.
It sadly is like that most of the time which sucks cuz geder swap could be such an interesting plot point in order to explore gender in general or even better gender dysphoria as most of those characters are definitely not trans lol or make a transition so smooth you would consider them to be, is crazy.
 
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you say someone is translating the web novel but putting it behind a pay wall? i mean releasing translations to patreons early is fine by me (i have supported a few in the past) but putting the translation behind a paywall? no thanks, i MTLed the webnovel when randomly finding it on syosetu, and i am going to say this, if you know how to use the deepl extension effectively, then just do that, if the translators are who i think they are, then it will be a thousand times better, since if they are who i think they are, i know that they destroy the japanese feel to them (you need to read good translations or mtl japanese novels, to know what i mean by that).

by the way i think that the novel (or at least as far as i have read) is a 7/10
 
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Just like every single gender swap manga… there is literally no reason for it 99.9% of the time. The first two or three chapters will have a few jokes about it, then it will never be addressed ever again.

99% of the time it would’ve just been better to have a woman at the start. No reason to have weird gender flip nonsense.
correction. YOU THINK there is no reason for it, we are just 4 chapters into the manga, it's hard to understand if there is a reason for it so early, and even if there isn't one, why do you think its nonsense? why do you think it would have been better if the mc was a woman in his previews life?

i mean, i am interested in what you have to say.

also, if you hate having a gender swap in a series so much, then why don't you exclude it from your searches?

one important think to mention, is that if the genderswap was mentioned all the time then it would have made the story slow, and it would have annoyed the readers. because there is a genderswap does not mean that it is always the primary focus of the story.
 
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