Ono furi Erufu to yumihiki dowāfu - Ch. 1 - Chapter 1

[MangaDex]

 

[GipoScribantino]

Some parts were hard to read, not for errors but because everything was blurry.
You might want to revise that part; otherwise it seems alright.

 

[josh47372]

Thanks for picking it up. But I have some suggestions.

Get a non-ESL proofreader, someone who's a native english speaker post on r/manga or r/scanlation on reddit or on the scanlation forum on here. Or use chatgpt to check your grammar.

Are you screenshoting the raws or downloading them? I suggest you find some place with rips and downloads those instead of screenshotting to avoid low res images. Like rawkuma or rawdevart if they have it.

Upscale the pages and reduce noise, use waifu2x (select all images in the folder). Or any other upscaler and noise reduction software. Please use different fonts https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/type/fonts.html. Here's guide. Remember to upscale raws before cleaning and typesetting.

And if you see double page spreads please combine them so it's one page, as per upload guidelines.

 

[Matthewkeen]

nice.

 

[Duralumin]

wrong, wrong, wrong. learn japanese and then english and try again.