Third image is probably supposed to be "want these" and not "what these." Fifth image, "concerned" is wrapped without a hyphen. Seventh image, "base" is wrapped incorrectly.
I feel like page 8 should be page 9, and page 9 should be page 8. The page alignment doesn't follow the normal flow as it is, and 9 she hugs Hesti, then in page 8 she bows while hugging her, then that bowing-while-hugging gets commented on.
@Lichon Well it is tagged seinen, in theory even more than that is allowable by the publisher, perhaps. It does feel new here specifically though to see even this I guess, 'cause we've had a lot of that jokey censorship from anime with the little chibi versions of people blocking stuff in the earlier half of things.