Really didn't get that, myself. There were a few small ones, but nothing that pulled me out, and they were relatively common, like punctuation. Maybe they fixed it since you posted? It's only been an hour and a half, though.Thanks for the tl, but there were a lot of grammatical mistakes which made reading a bit rough
It's not, but that would be an interesting idea. A trap set by goblins or orcs.Imagine if one of the requirements to get teleported was being a female.