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The manuscript being his family is genuinely creepy, but it doesn't really land well for me because Yamase doesn't look willing to discuss with Kojika about their past. Yes in the first chapter he excused himself in a panic, and she laughed it off, and we as readers know that he wants to "user" her to finally get a good publishing deal. But before anything overly creepy happens, I think there should be some kind of attempt (failed, or not) at diplomacy, to establish a dynamic that goes beyond just what's been going on in this chapter, which is mostly just a play at making light humour out of the odd borderline creepy situations.