p1 panel 2 "making me often forget" -> "often making me forget"
p1 panel 2 "i hoped that one day we could be able to cast spells" -> "i hoped that one day we would be able to cast spells" (or just "could cast spells"?)
p8 panel 5 "eh? i'm wrong?" -> "eh? am i wrong?"
p10 panel 1 "i'm so jelous" -> "i'm so jealous"
p10 panel 3 i'm not sure about this one since i can't read moon but perhaps "but that.. when she's only 18.." "but that's.. when she was only 18.." but it doesn't really fit. i don't know the purpose of this line in the first place though
p11 panel 2 "was awkard" -> "was awkward"
p11 panel 3 again, i can't read moon but "he stood for the things he disliked" -> "he stood for the things he liked" since he was supposedly doing it for her then gf? idk
p11 panel 4 "trully an idiot" -> "truly an idiot"
plus some missing commas
would be nice if others can chime in
@Thennos