Oretachi no Party wa Machigatteiru

Fed-Kun's army
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Jan 24, 2018
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Too many useless monologue backstories (specially for the ninja bit) but pretty amusing story lol
 
Fed-Kun's army
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The story is really lacking. The art isn't really that good and looks kind of amateurish. The characters aren't interesting and the only curse I find interesting is the dude that got turned into a chick and even then they don't do much. The story is also cliche. I kind of like the idea that the dude that turned into a chick turns into Yuri with the Princess. But the Knight dude is kind of obnoxious really.
 
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Jan 30, 2018
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1: Plot brilliant idea
2: Story execution, needs work
3: Art, ok also needs work

I'm enjoying it, only because it's a fresh look at classic tropes. I would love to see what this author can do once they get some experience in.
 
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Oct 29, 2018
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Ite, that last chapter put the nail in the coffin, story just annoys me at this point, big drop.
 
Dex-chan lover
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Last chapter (ch 12) felt like something an author would write when his series gets axed. Sad, since the premise seemed interesting enough, even if it ended up a weird mess.
 

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