Oshi no Bishoujo ni Kokuhaku sareru Hanashi - Vol. 2 Ch. 10

[Sp00kyier]

I am not sure about it, but shouldn't a lot of the "you" & "i" be inverted, it looks so off.

Edit: I read it a second time to be sure, and yeah page 24+ feels weird. ( also Rika-sam instead of -san page 13 )

thanks for calling us out, we appreciate the feedback! but most of it was probably me taking on to much work at late hours

 

[Avonc4d0]

Chat, I believe yuzu is cooked

 

[spiffinn]

Thanks for the update! I can feel an improvement over the last one. And I would second what someone else said about being careful about line breaks: it should be "misunderstand- / ing" or "misunder- / standing" not "misundersta / nding". also there should always be a hyphen (dash) when breaking up a word. also as another comment, I would have a minimum margin for your bubbles/boxes so the text doesn't overlap with a border. and change the text size a little (tho don't make it too small) to fit the layout of the page and bubbles. sorry for the rant, hope this helps!

 

[Cherryfuju]

Generational fumble there Rika. You had literally had her right where you wanted her and then you go and do some goofy shit like insult her underwear 😭😭😭

 

[Marek79813]

Damn she like me with the thighs.

 

[SkyVentus]

Generational fumble there Rika. You had literally had her right where you wanted her and then you go and do some goofy shit like insult her underwear 😭😭😭

The fashion senses kicked in at the worst time possible XD

Now she gonna need to fill Yuzu's horny gauge to unlock the sex scene again. But then again how hard can it be for her?

 

[popo53414]

ugwahh I am dead

 

[yanderecoverl]

Damn, good thing Yuzu sets up boundaries for a long time, need more dates tbh

 

[orangerain7734]

I can kind of understand the emotional aspect behind the act, but ... they're both girls. Neither of them will get pregnant if they do it. So long as they find their desires are mutual, there's really no downside to doing it sooner rather than later, aside from STD through a yeast infection, maybe?

 

[Sp00kyier]

Thanks for the update! I can feel an improvement over the last one. And I would second what someone else said about being careful about line breaks: it should be "misunderstand- / ing" or "misunder- / standing" not "misundersta / nding". also there should always be a hyphen (dash) when breaking up a word. also as another comment, I would have a minimum margin for your bubbles/boxes so the text doesn't overlap with a border. and change the text size a little (tho don't make it too small) to fit the layout of the page and bubbles. sorry for the rant, hope this helps!

yeah i tried with the line breaks and hyphens early, but gave up. because again, i took on to much work at late hours for myself, next chapter will be way better as (even though i had them this chapter) i have a PR and an Editor now and just didnt know how to split up work well. so all the type setting and all that will be better next chapter. and about there not being hypens when words broke up, idk what happened there, photoshop literally didnt allow me to add them.

 

[BanzaiYuri]

Ch 1 felt like a whole 100+ chapter manga, now it's feeling a real 100+ chapter manga that progresses 1% by C100 and 99% by C110.

 

[Wachtail]

10/10
Thanks for the chapter!

 

[KeraFury]

im so glad we are back

 

[Jkc121302]

Yuzu done lost her damn mind talking about we still in high school have they not seen GUSHING OVER MAGICAL GIRLS THEM MFS WERE IN MIDDLE SCHOOL AND ONE OF THEM WAS STILL IN ELEMENTARY

 

[EnFiveFour]

Thank you for the translation!

 

[Louis2568]

We are so back...

LIttle ironic she also stops for the same reasoning she did... seems like an intentional parallel, I like it. Shame they wont gex till graduation, but if thats how it snows, then it goes.

Love these two

No they definitely will Sesbian Lex before graduation. Rika is without a doubt 100% winning this bet

 

[Ariiaa]

just degenerate already yuzu, and do seg with rika

 

[miniwaz]

H-CUP?

 

[Sp00kyier]

just degenerate already yuzu, and do seg with rika

check yuzu to rika