Damn, she turned into a bro real fkn quick. Kinda here for it nglRival character/Love triangle
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Exactly, makes zero sense how he acts weird af towards the one girl who is actually into him but invests zero energy nor care into the women who actually try to use himI agree, he's not supposed to be an asshole.
But it's not being an asshole to not help someone who was using you.
Because that's the thing: she was still using him.
He was hurt by the reveal, just that he's so used to it that it's not surprising for him anymore.
So he got all the reasons in the world to hold a grudge.
And even if he was not holding a grudge: why would he want to asociate himself with someone who was using him?
I mean, his whole character until now was "Girls try to get close to me to get close to my brother, not because they actual cares about me, so I won't trust any girl." It's because of that that he was fleeing the heroine at the start.
And the one time we see a girl actually using him... He's just like "No, it's no big deal, i'm used to it".
I'm sorry, but I don't think it's coherent.
I was not talking about his weird tsundere act and desire to trust the heroine. I was talking about the fact that he is extremly wary of her (well,he was way more suspicious in the begining, now he's warming up to her) and he had multiple moments where he was trying to ignore her because of the whole "She will use me too".
That's why i'm saying his reaction this chapter makes no sense:
A girl is trying to get close to him and seems to be interested in him, and only him? "No, it's a lie, I can't believe her".
Another girl reveal that she was trying to get close to him to use him? "Haha it's okay I knew it, now let me help you. Even better: let's be friend!"
I'm sorry but no: she got forgiven way too easily.
(Sorry. I'll stop.)I'm all for giving people second chances but she was forgived way too easily.
Author, you can't have the MC being suspicious about all of the women approaching him for 7 chapters because he's afraid of being used again, and when it actually happens, he's just like" I'm too nice i'm gonna help her haha".
No, you just ruined the whole concept of your character...
The way he acted with the heroine until now make no senses at all...
I usually use "wing-girl". Flows better even if it can a bit misattributed for the characters age. It can look weird when written without a hyphen or space though "winggirl" :\Agreed, they could have easily gone down the road of "second rival girl who fell for MC for one single act of kindness." Instead, she just became wingman (err.. wingwoman?).
She does have a track record of falling in love with boys because they picked something up for herobv she didn't because he didn't pick up her eraser. if it was that, she would've definitely fell in love with him. thats anime logic 101
You're kinda rightI'm all for giving people second chances but she was forgived way too easily.
Author, you can't have the MC being suspicious about all of the women approaching him for 7 chapters because he's afraid of being used again, and when it actually happens, he's just like" I'm too nice i'm gonna help her haha".
No, you just ruined the whole concept of your character...
The way he acted with the heroine until now make no senses at all...