Ossan Yuusha wa Kajiya de Slow Life Hajimemashita - Ch. 1

[nathan67003]

I like the plated forearm design, it's definitely not a take on human-form dragons you see often

 

[anonymousthief]

Basically a knockoff of that other Isekai Blacksmith series with the tiger girl.

We see this sort of thing with manga having a very similar premise, like those 2 different manga about a Japanese farmer finding a female knight in his field.

 

[TestAddress]

Of course I can make it way better. I've been doing it for years. Also, learn english first and stop releasing shit.

Way to go!

 

[ironbear]

Wow! That metal stapler is really well made. It can penetrate the drsgon's scales so easily.

 

[AMicrowave]

The previous version was really bad. This is much improved

While still MTL, it's much more readable. Still a few minor grammar mistakes but overall much better. If you're still up for suggestions, a proofreader would probably help a lot, just getting a second set of eyes can really help. Also, (and this is really minor) a font change would help it look less cheap, and you could probably drop the size of the font by a size or 2. Would probably make the typesetting easier too.
Great job sticking with it.

Unrelated, but where did he find the spinach? Didn't he just say there wasn't much to eat?

popeye gave it to him of course

 

[AMicrowave]

comic sans

lol, comic sans really, the most infamous "amateur" font, if you use comic sans you're bound to be made fun of

 

[AMicrowave]

MC is dumb, naive and uninteresting. Dude wasted 15 years of his youth without exploring his potential and still think the king is decent.

He still has the skill hero growth and environmental adaptation isn’t it. Why not using it for good but just hole up there for nothing. Wasting his life.

The dragon suck too. She literally about to die from a shallow wound which can be treated by stitching a bit. ???

have some reading comprehension, mc was pretty much confined to the castle, how can he explore his potential like that?